shanan-cat

I only had one problem with your story, if it is a poem I think that it should at least have verses, like after every four lines or so, you ...

Oh, thank the lord! You changed it and it's so much better now! Are you pleased with yourself? I like it a lot better than the other one. I have ...

Meg? It was good but kinda short especially for you. Work on it, o.k? shanan-cat!

Camille! When did you get time to do this? It was amazing! I have nothing wrong with it. shanan-cat!

LOVED IT!!!!, but you have to watch for spacing and a few typos but that is it! KEEP IT UP!!! shanan-cat!

I have nothing to say ti this except that you are the best writer that I have ever seen and reviewed. Really you should maybe when your older, publish some ...

It was good, but you should have a space in between every four lines, O.k? I liked the rhyming and how you used something old and a life story and ...

Hi! I liked your story, and I think it was original. I don't know why so many people do so many long reviews. It's pointless!\ Anyways I liked your story. ...

Thanks for the advice! Hopefully, I'll manage to get around to retyping it with more of point and ahve it be less cliche,k? and thanks for the review! shanan-cat!

Thanks for all the replies guys and I will use your advice in a most respected way. shanan-cat

you shouldn't have stopped, it was good, but if you kept going, you would have amde it even better (seriously)!!! (I don't agree with via, it does make sense and ...