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LOVED IT!!!!, but you have to watch for spacing and a few typos but that is it!
KEEP IT UP!!!
shanan-cat!

That was good straight to the point.... and actually thats how im feelin about someone right now so ur poem actually helped me out good job and thanxx

thanx i do it was just in a bitter mood...its out my system go on to things that matter thanx for posting.

darkdove wrote:I can’t believe I almost felt a little bad over you. Three months of my life I’ll never get back. I leave for three days and you’re off with the Loch Nest Monster and crack. IF that was the case I should have done more, dipped into the forbidden fruit until I was neck deep in it.
I blame myself for not seeing the real you before. I blame myself for wasting my time with a complete head cased horn dog, which frankly isn't’t that great of a kisser. You’re completely spacey and not in the[a] good way. I get why your ex girls (my friends) dumped you the way they did. Maybe I was too good to do it to your face. I mean god knows you didn't’t [didn't]deserve it, nor did you deserve my compassion for you – which now I[it might be better to say "I now"] question completely. Consider this you have the tendencies of a lap dog and the tongue like one,[this sounds more like speechm, you probably want to give it a read and modify it a bit ] I actually dislike looking, talking, and in general being with you. I knew I couldn't’t trust that thing you called love from you. To add insult to the entire injury you run off with the offspring form [?]species. Its not that she’s ugly – even though she is – is more of her personality that makes people itch. In the end you deserve each other, the worse of the bunch. Have fun trying to stop your Herpes that she probably gave you from out breaking. You’ll do well and maybe just maybe you’ll figure out that you’re a complete dick wad, douche bag, unfeeling , fucking leech, who only wants one thing and its obvious you’ll never get it. You make random comments that people won’t laugh at be most likely kick you in the balls. In conclusion all I’m saying is you’re an asshole and if I was as low as you I probably would have went Bobbitt on your ass.
----Have a nice day.

Haha. Clever. i like it