shanan-cat

Good poem, but the layout is a little weird... I'd suggest to lay it out like so just so that people can read it better: Every time I see you, ...

Greetings. Just to start off, I thought this poem was interesting, but a little bland. I couldn't quite myself around the simple words that you used to describe your feelings. ...

Oh, very unique! :D Although, very different.... I think that most people understand that when reading a poem, you count the syllables in your head. I thinks it's actually a ...

I'm sorry, but do you have an obssesion with the letter "I"? The first thing that I noticed wasn't what you wrote or any of the words that you had ...

This was AMAZING! I loved the way that you made those few words bold at certain times, but in the future, try to refrain from doing that. It takes the ...

Welcome! I know I'm not really ready to this welcoming thing, but I felt like you need it and I liked that short piece that you had there. I really ...

Very nicely done. I loved reading it and I thought it was great. The only problem that I had with it was here: Dark as black midnight. Bright as morning ...

Sometimes I feel like I'm always left out, Sometimes I feel like a miss out, Some times I feel like I’m the odd one out, dom"] Alright. This poem is ...

I really like this piece, but I think that there are a few things that you could change. Not big things, but snall things that make the difference between "Like" ...

Well, this is definitely and interesting story line... very original and appealing. You picked a some wicked words and had a excellent idea to how you were going to end, ...

I know this sounds really, really emo at the beginning, but bear with me. It gets better. I want the world to go away. The bustling cities, The quiet woodlands, ...

That was so good. The way you made all your words rhyme was easy going and beautiful. It felt as the words melted in my mouth while I read it ...

Truly amazing work there, Medusa! Keep it up, and just a little note, add more detail! :smt016 Have fun writing, Shanan-cat! :elephant:

Okay... That was good, very good! It had good flow to it, I just thought that there were a few things that you need too change-- and that's under my ...

Haven't heard of you in a long time, girlfriend! So, onto the review! If I need to fight I will fight and you can’t stop me. This is how it ...