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i like it. Shame for the rapist! I believed that the victim was brave to face the truth at first, but she failed later and screwed everything. What a sad ...

Thanks for appreciating... In need of your comments to improve... :D

No matter who you are, what you believe, what you do or what you did.. God loves you.. What an inspiring work. I liked it! Keep it up...

Thanks so much. I need more of your comments to solidify my work. :) I did some changes and I plan to formalize it soon... I still need your help...

Thanks so much. I need more of your comments to solidify my work. :) I did some changes and I plan to formalize it soon... I still need your help...

Thanks so much. I need more of your comments to solidify my work. :) I did some changes and I plan to formalize it soon... I still need your help...

Puzzled by how you deliver the words. Yep. Puzzled but I enjoyed reading it. :)

The instance that letting the reader feel the story is there but still need some arrangements. Hmm.. somehow related to my case. lol. Well, keep it up! ;)

Thanks for the comment dancingmangos.. :) Very good analysis.

Very nice. Keep it up. :)

Thanks for the comments guys...

haha. nice poem.. makes me don't wanna wear my pants too.. let's be naked.. lol. btw, i like your style. keep it up.