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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: War of all against all

    Wow! Just wow! I absolutely love everything about this. It really makes you feel as if you're there, watching society unfold. It makes you wonder how far our own world ...

    May 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: You died, tonight.

    Haha I love it, definatly what I think every time the internet stops working.

    Jan 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Of differences: of what we want and what we are.

    I agree with TmB317 about the meaning. Overall I love the poem, the emotion of it drew me in, and I couldn't stop reading until I got to the end. ...

    Jan 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Persephone's Daughter

    I loved this. It really flowed in the way Greek myths do, I almost forgot it wasn't actully part of Greek mythology. Keep up the good work.

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Suicidal Moon

    Wow! This is one of the most powerfull things I've ever read. It's got so much emotion without being whiny. Great job.

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: To YWS (Happy Sixth Birthday)

    Absolutly love it. *clicks like button*

    Nov 17, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Your* Poem's Title is Probably In This One

    Even though it didn't make total sense, it's definatly a good poem and a great idea.

    Nov 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: When the world finally goes silent

    I loved this poem, and what's awesome is I was listening to a song by Never Shout Never, called the day that music died, which really helped me get into ...

    Aug 16, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Daddy

    Wow! This is definatly on of the best things I've read in a while. I thought you captured a small child's point of view perfectly, but for most of the ...

    Aug 10, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Crank!!!!! Ellen Hopkins =)

    There is a new book, that I don't think is out yet, but is about her son, Hunter if I remember right. In some copies of Glass there is a ...

    Jul 12, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Crank!!!!! Ellen Hopkins =)

    You going to love this book more than life itself I guarantee. The second your done with it I know you'll want to go the store right then to pick ...

    Jul 9, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Howl of an Angel

    I really like this and don't have any complaints. No spelling errors that I caught, and punctuation looks right. I really agree with ziggiefred, the "Howl" part kinda threw me ...

    Jun 20, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: What I Now Am

    For a two minute poem this is great. I'm not gonna give a thero reveiw but I did notice in stanza four you forgot to capitilize "all"

    May 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: jealousy

    this poem is nice but not overly amazing. It was a little hard to follow with all the words running together. I think you should consider putting it in stanzas.

    May 10, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Carbonation and Katies

    i love this i was just going to skim it at first and i read all of it.

    May 9, 2010


The reason a boat sinks isn't the water around it. It sinks when water gets into it. Don't let what's happening around you weigh you down.
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