sbear1231

HEY! First of all, I like the emotion behind this poem. It seemed very realistic to me. Personally, I'm into more abstract poems so when I found myself liking this ...

HEY! I really enjoyed reading your poem primarily because it created a whole bunch of thoughts in the back of my mind. Every thing that I thought about while reading ...

Hey! First of all..... I LOVED IT! I really enjoyed the imagery. For me it was very easy to visualize. I also really liked the concept behind it. The whole ...

Hey! Very impressive piece! I thought that your use of repetition was very unique to anything I have ever read before. Each scenario was also unique in its own way ...

Hey! This story is very interesting! I love your descriptions, they are so detailed. While reading this piece, I could practically see the setting in front of my eyes. I ...

Hey! I just want to say that first of all, I think this story is amazing! It's full of emotions which the reader can understand. What I mean by that ...

I liked the idea that there is a lot of things that the reader can interpret from it but at the same time I feel like I don't really know ...

WOW! This story is amazing! To me, this felt like a real person. This story really took a darker look on humanity but you did it in a way that ...

Wow! I'm not really sure what to say :/ . I honestly can't see anything wrong with it..... So why don't I just tell you all the good things I ...

Hey! I think that this is an amazing story! Aside from the occasional grammatical error, I thought it was really good. I think you have a really incredible power to ...

Hey! I really enjoyed this story because it was very open to the reader. What I mean is that every reader can interpret it in their own way. At the ...

Hey! I love the simplicity of this story! It's such a simple plot that it really allows your descriptive abilities to shine. It was actually very shocking to me to ...

I honestly think that this is one of the best stories I have read on YWS. I love how dramatic you are! It's amazing because you turn every little movement ...

Hey, I just want to start by saying that I thought this story was amazing! You have an amazing talent in terms of depiction which is something that I find ...