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Beautiful! I can totally relate to this having felt exactly that way pretty recently.I'm happy to let this poem be...because although it's vague that leads me to apply it to ...

Hello there, This was very clever--I love the way you tied the end back to the title. I do have nitpicks: I drove the blade into her neck, feeling fresh ...

Hi Jessa, First of all, I want to say that I think it's fantastic the way you deal with issues in your life. Instead of worrying from the perspective of ...

This is very beautiful...if somewhat heartbreaking. I had only a few nitpicks: I call you dad because I'm supposed to but you've never been a father to me. I love ...

This is beautiful! I love it! Very clever, and not something that I've read before. Kudos! I especially like the second stanza. The whole thing is very beautiful. I love ...

Hi there, This is very nice. I love your narrative style! I have a few nitpicks--mostly typos: “It’s for you only,” Alexander said as if that explained everything . “Trust ...

Hello Angel, and welcome to YWS! Alrighty. First of all, your intro really sucked me in. I loved the first stanza, and was immediately curious for an explanation. I have ...

Ooh, I like this! Very nice! I especially love the opening stanza--it had me totally hooked for what you were going to say next--very beautiful! I also loved the last ...

Hey, I love this--beautiful!! I love the extended metaphor, and your writing style is really beautiful! The one thing that I was somewhat confused about was the way that you ...

Hi there, Nice job on this! I have a few nitpicks for you: Winging its lonely way Onward toward the horizon. Never a permanent denizen, But ever soaring away. This ...

Hi there, Here for a review! I liked this start. I think that it could easily be the first chapter of a novel, but as a short story it doesn't ...

Oh karzkin...always on the lookout for "haiku" ;) Anyway, I thought these were nice. I'm not a fan of movie marathons (I'm prone to headaches) but I appreciated these nonetheless. ...

Hey there, Liked your poem! First off I have a few nitpicks: I swoop upward Carving a perfect arc Headed up to heaven Headed to the perfect skies Closing my ...

Hi Hamer, This was really beautiful! I loved the first four lines. I also loved the next two lines. And the last two. Basically I loved the whole thing. I ...

Hi Janika, Here for a review! I enjoyed your poem. It's short and to the point, but very lyrical. Nice job! First of all, I have a few nitpicks. Night ...