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Oh my goodness! This is wonderful! I love the vocabulary! I'm seeing words I've never seen and not only is it expanding my vocabulary as I look it up, but ...

Short, sweet, to the point! I really liked it! The rhymes were awesome and the topic, something I really respect. Thank you for sharing!

Great! Very descriptive, a bit of a downer! I like it because downers are my cup of tea! Really awesome though! Keep it up!

thanks for the feedback guys! and sorry im a little late! but really the negative feedback really helps LOADS not that the compliments arent nice, thanks so much, but i ...

I think that's a great haiku. I guess most haiku don't express themselves so much because they're so limited as to how much space you have. This haiku is different. ...

I feel like this poem is broken up by lines too much. I'm not a fan of the format but the poem has greatness behind it. Keep up the good ...

This is simply amazing! There are a few things I would change, like shorten up the lines a bit, but I love it! Keep writing, you have major talent.

It was good but by the middle it got weak. I really like it, and I can see the message you're conveying, I just don't know if the words you ...

I love it. It makes life seem so happy, so frivolous. I have no criticism except why haven't you written more!?

I didn't like it much because I feel like it was monotone and emotionless. I understand your passion, but it seems dark almost.

I like this! I think you completely owned it and you deserve the prize! It's Fabulous! :D

I like this! It's sad and very true. Sometimes sad but true helps you see the reality, and get over your own stupid pettyness

This is WONDERFUL! No criticism here! Funny, Ironic, Flowing, With a Point! I love this! Thank you for sharing! :)

Thanks very much, its nice to know that someone likes my poems. If you like what you see, another follower would be nice!

Thanks everyone, I've made those changes! I love constructive criticism! Keep it coming! Also, if you read this, would you guys check our my two other poems I've posted so ...