santana

First off I want to say I enjoyed this. It's a bit dark, reminding me of the Edgar Allen Poe stories we read in school. I only found one mistake ...

I'm a bit confused about your last line. "record for the death" That last bit sounds as if you are talking about a list of deaths. Are you referring to ...

I'm not much of a Kpop fan, but I still feel the need to review...so...here goes nothing... 1)I think your very first sentence should've been a bit complex. Instead of ...

First off, great poem. Emotion is the key to writing true poetry. I felt the pain and sorrow as I read your work and was able to follow your flow ...

When literary pieces are full of emotion, I feel that they're the best works ever created. This piece was great. The only thing that kinda threw me off was the ...

My ELA and literature teachers always told my class that starting a work with a rhetorical question isn't the best idea for a hook... The whole rhetorical question at the ...

It feels nice to be the first to review new works... ...especially since I'm passing the time while waiting for the bell to ring... Anyways... I liked this. It really ...

Can you say "Just right"? You had me hooked at the first sentence. This was perfect. There were no spelling or grammatical errors. Your story flowed smoothly. And to top ...

It's just like you said, this is short. But hey, no one cares, right? Let me start by saying good job. Even though your work was short, in a sense ...

Short and sweet as my people say. When I first saw the title of your poem, I was expecting something really long. Now that I've read it, I'm wondering: "How ...

Yes, I know that feeling all too well. There was nothing wrong with your work. There weren't any mistakes, and if there were any, I better get some glasses asap. ...

Wow... This was an awesome story. No grammar or punctuation mistakes; you rarely find a story as perfect as this one. It seems as if you revised it several times ...

Okay let's get down to business. First off, great story, but it needs a little editing. When I read this piece, I found a few grammar mistakes:threw should be through ...

I loved your dialogue. It's very much like the dialogue I use when I'm not in school...or...well...when I'm not around adults. The story is relative to a play in a ...

It's obvious that you don't endulg in poetry very often. Your poem made me laugh, but it left me a little skeptical about kisses. O_o What a twisted version of ...