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Dear ZeldaIsSheik, I don't know why you are unhappy with it, I think it sounds amazing! I love the line: That my heart may open like a parabola because it ...

Dear EagleFly, I like that your poem is addressing a current conspiracy theory with a lot majority on the "round" argument. But I also feel the need to say a ...

Dear fraey, This sounds like such a cute little poem! Though I'm a little confused by the quotes: uproot my lovely flower to plant you besides my dirt grave. since ...

Dear Biluata, OH. MY. GOD. This is beautiful! Absolutely stunning!!! I fell in love with the words, and the rhyme scheme and honestly everything about it! 1. I love how ...

Dear DEA, This poem sounds so cool! Honestly, I think it was very well written, and it has a very important underlying meaning. I would love to hear more about ...

Dear LadyBird, My nine year old cousin says, "I hate eggs. They're gross and mushy, and they're bleh. And they taste like poo, not that I've ever tasted poo but ...

Dear LadyBird, My nine year old cousin says, "That made no sense. Doggies are cute! How dare you say that they're evil! Please don't. I have a puppy and she's ...

Dear LadyBird, My nine year old cousin says, "I for example means for me I love my cousin, and 1% for the emotion they need does not make sense. You ...

Dear LadyBird, This is quite simple. Though, as my nine year old cousin says, "It's the devil, because it never had a life with a woman and it never had ...

Dear Horisun, It took me a minute to understand the poem, but I kind of had to laugh a little at the last few lines. The title definitely drew me ...

Dear mavisknightley, My, my! This is an excellently written poem filled with the words of many brilliant sources of imagery. I love that the deed has "wreckage" and was created ...

Dear Casanova, This is a very interesting piece. Though I am left wondering, and yet a little confused, I find myself pleased with what you have written. I think it ...

Hey hiraeth! I'd like to say that I love that last paradoxical sentence, "and i surrender / to the Freedom." I also find it interesting that in that line "i" ...

I think this poem is really well done. Though there are quite a few false rhymes such as devil and evil, and poison and illusion. But otherwise, I think this ...

Hey pattyperfection! I'm a little confused by the 1, 2, 3 theme. It seems like you've given it a lot of thought, and I can't really get in the way ...