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Yay! I am so happy with how quickly you came out with the second chapter. Again, I just love how the main character is a preschooler, and you captured the ...

Okay, this is absolutely amazing, it's relevant and very, very true. One thing that I found interesting is that you seem to refer to mankind as "she" rather than the ...

Okay this was really cute. I love that the main character is a preschooler, cuz that's not something you see often unless it's a children's book. I don't see how ...

Oh. My. God. is all I can say to this, this was aboslutely amazing! Normally I don't like to read short stories as I tend to find them boring, but ...

absolutely love this, normally I tell people with more serious topics to shy away from using a rhyme scheme, but here it really works. Your poem has a nice rhythm ...

I love this poem as it is extremely relevant and does explain the idealology of many people, however, if I am being totally honest, the fact that you used a ...

This is a very nice poem and I did enjoy reading it, however, keep in mind I'm simply nitpicking, the title and description don't really convey the nature of the ...

Okay, I first read this and was just like "whoa" like dang, this is absolutely amazing and is something I can truly relate to on a really personal level, as ...

I love the poem, how it transitions from failure to hope by the end of the poem, however, if I am going to be brutally honest, I found this poem ...

I love this poem and how there is a story, how it starts thinking of one person that goes to yourself. The only critique I have is the changing of ...

Okay, I just love this, it's applicable to almost every story and can even be applied to real life. It was just so perfect and honestly thought provoking, which is ...

I love this poem so much, I also suffer from scoliosis and its painful all on its own. I love this poem even more because of how it can also ...

This is a really nice poem, however I find you use the article "the" a but to much, perhaps find words that would possibly flow better with the poem, in ...

I really like this poem, there are few things I would change concerning structure and formatting that would help the poem flow better, as it appears to be free verse. ...

Beautifully written poem, and I love the title. the only thing I can think of that would improve this is if you went through and fixed how often you switch ...