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Hello! This is so very lovely and Romantic! You are able to capture a scene perfectly in two stanzas while also making me wish someone was reading this to me! ...

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Hey there! This is an awesome poem about the way you feel when you aren't quite sure where you belong. First, the awesome dichotomy that you have in every stanza ...

Hey there! I'm just going to split this up by entry so it's easier to read! Also, only take the feedback want, these are all just suggestions! Entry 1: I ...

Hey!! omg! I loved writing this! And I'm glad you had fun reading it! I'll think about changing that last line! I like the idea of adding something about James!

Hey there! I absolutely love this poem! It fits the spooky vibes of October perfectly. Part of me feels like it is a perfect addition to The Telltale Heart or ...

Hi there! I love how absolutely spooky this is! The allusions to death and the theme of darkness all the way through really add to the entire vibe that you ...

Hey there! This poem is beautiful and heartbreaking. I love how much you are able to allude through with the short lines that you wrote in!! It really makes me ...

my goodness this made me laugh out loud!

Hi! I am so glad you liked it! I'll let you know when the next part it out!! I'll let you know about the roleplay!

Hi! Thank you so much for this amazing review! I worked really hard on this and I'm so excited to share it with others! I will totally let you know ...

Hi! Thank you for writing out this incredible review! And thanks for the notes on adverbs as you can tell they are definitely a bad habit that I have as ...

Hi sorry, ignore that comment! I accidentally sent it before it was ready!

Thanks!

Thank you for taking the time to read it! I'm glad you liked the imagery and the characters! What were the grammar mistakes so that I can take care of ...