ryleigh127

I like the background story, but it was slightly confusing. The way you described the words was a little strange and you didn't give much input on the whole situation. ...

This is very interesting twist. I like how you described not wanting to respond but so compelled to do so. It goes in the mind of everybody on Earth with ...

This is very interesting twist. I like how you described not wanting to respond but so compelled to do so. It goes in the mind of everybody on Earth with ...

Thank you very much! I'll be sure to check out your work!

Thanks! It means a lot! If you'd like to read the next part in this story it will be posted on December 13th!

This poem is filed with a tone of emotion, which is really good. I don't write poetry myself, but I know a good one when I see one. This was ...

I like how you illustrated the person as if they were in denial of their depression and suicidal thoughts. It was a nice play on words. Great whorl! I'd like ...

I am going to be continuing this. This is sort of a preview to see how people like it. I'll most likely be posting at least once a day or ...

I love it. It tells a really emotional story, but in a creative and exciting way. The way you right is really nice and I would like to see more ...

I love it. It tells a really emotional story, but in a creative and exciting way. The way you right is really nice and I would like to see more ...

what the narrator meant by "my heart wasn't beating, yet I could feel it's awkward dance inside my chest," was that they were in doubt that their heart could still ...

Thanks for the critique! And yes I did mean to put the space for the last line.

I love the title and the story told. It explains many things to me and to your other readers! The way this project is laid out is amazing, and like ...

I love the title and the story told. It explains many things to me and to your other readers! The way this project is laid out is amazing, and like ...

THIS SPEAKS OF MY LIFE! I hate it when people make assumptions and you worded it so well, it's amazing. I love the emotion you put into this and how ...