ryleigh127

I like the background story, but it was slightly confusing. The way you described the words was a little strange and you didn't give much input on the whole situation. ...

This is very interesting twist. I like how you described not wanting to respond but so compelled to do so. It goes in the mind of everybody on Earth with ...

This story had me very intrigued, but you had several capitalization and grammatical errors. If you look back through the passage, you'll notice that the beginning off several sentences were ...

This poem has a lot of potential. I like how it's only in a sort of diary of journal form. The vocabulary is awesome and the way you laid out ...

This poem really plays with emotions. I like how it uses normal words to describe an intense feeling, and telling a story. I would keep writing like this if I ...

This is an amazing story. It had almost no grammar or spelling mistakes and was laid out perfectly. Even though it was is second person it was really easy to ...

I like the story! It had very interesting vocabulary and a nice plot, but I would like to know more. Are you going to be writing a sequel or are ...

I love the title and the story told. It explains many things to me and to your other readers! The way this project is laid out is amazing, and like ...

I like the variety of words you used! The way you write is very bold, and it really brought me into the story you were telling. I made me feel ...