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Aww thank you so much! :)

Yeah, it was a typo. I fixed it. Thank you!

Thank you for such sweet words :) Really appreciate it.

Oh thank you! @NicolMemo

Hey, thank you so much for the review! The spelling mistake was a typo, I will fix that right away. I found some of your suggestions very helpful. :) Thank ...

Haha, I'm glad you think it's great. I never explain the meaning of my poetry and I just LOVE to hear what other people think it is so yeah, think ...

Thank you so much

Yeah the punctuations are okay now. Well, I have attempted suicide myself (a failed attempt ofcourse) but I didn't feel scared even for a moment. Though I was saved as ...

oh, thank you! And the "your" is just a typo. I'll fix it right away. :)

Yeah I did miss the "a" before the word "host". Thanks for this wonderful review. I just came out of a writer's block and this means a lot to me. ...

Thank you! The fate thing is needed for the rhyme scheme :)

First of all welcome to YWS! Secondly, thank you for your kind words. :) It means a lot to a writer when his/her work is appreciated.

I agree with Empress. I would really like to read and give you a feedback. Just copy and paste. :)

I'm not harsh. I just say what I feel. :) And I say to make the work better and to help. I think you should take a look at my ...

Those are my favourite lines as well! :)