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  • Other » General, General Re: Disappear.Daily

    Hi, quietgirl, welcome to YWS! Is this disappear.daily thing a series you're trying to do? If its not, then I agree with what Stormcloud said: you could have left this ...

    Mar 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Firebreed Chapter 4- Lucky Break

    Hi, Awkard! I'm pkid, stopping by for a (hopefully) short review... First Impressions I'm not a fan of the way you wrote this, splitting up the scenes by dates. I ...

    Mar 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Me and My Imagination: Chapter 6, A Risky Guest

    Hi um, I don't know how to pronounce your name, so I'll just stick with swizzy. ;P Unfortunately, I haven't read any of the previous chapters so there are a ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Water is Kind - Chapter 2: The Email

    Hello, hello! So I totally jumped right into this but I have a pretty good idea of the overall story, no worries there. The plot is understandable and I love ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Other » General, General Re: I Had The Writers Slump

    Hey babymagic, I'm not quite sure how to review this since it isn't exactly a work and you could have gotten away with it as a blog or whatnot, but ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Blessed

    This was certainly somewhat of an intense story, Aly! I'm certainly not one of those apocalypse or zombie-domination freaks but I kind of liked this story. And, that you should ...

    Mar 25, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Romantic, Dramatic Re: An Open Letter To My Greatest Crush (3/20/17)

    Wow. I honestly do not know what to say. This is just so beautiful. To be quite honest with you, I had a little flashback of my own writings in ...

    Mar 24, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Goodbye, Father

    Good afternoon, Rose. Can I just share my thoughts with you on this piece? It's very beautiful and poignant, yet I enjoyed it in a strange way. You've somehow managed ...

    Mar 23, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Simple Meeting

    Can I just drop in and say a few things, chhlove? Fun fact: I love books, too. ;P First off, I don't know if you intended that huge, blank space ...

    Mar 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Literature Re: Chapter 1> The moon

    Hello Aries! I thought I'd stop by and review this, seeing how interesting it looks. Oh my word, I love your profile picture, even though its not a profile picture... ...

    Mar 9, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: you can be king again - 1.3

    Hey Ash, you got the kid here dropping in for a (hopefully) quick review. I read the first chapter of this story and ended up skipping the second but I'm ...

    Mar 8, 2017
  • Other » Horror, Dramatic Re: My 2 Sentence Horror Stories

    Hey Kara, I'm just dropping in for a short review though usually, whenever I say that it ends up being WAY too long. I don't know - were you looking ...

    Mar 7, 2017
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Narrative Re: Anointing of the Sick

    Hello there, vaders. I hope you're doing good today. I know I am. : ) This was a very interesting story and I thoroughly enjoyed it. These kind of fables ...

    Mar 4, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, General Re: Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 7

    Alright no formalities this time ( I know who you are, you know who I am) so let me just jump in with Thoughts on the 1st Section She cut ...

    Mar 1, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, Romantic Re: After he left the revised version

    Hey Charlotte, you got a review coming at you from the chick! ; ) How are you doing? Great, I hope. This story is somewhat sad... but beautiful. (Also very ...

    Feb 27, 2017


Patience is the strength of the weak, impatience is the weakness of the strong.
— Immanuel Kant, Philosopher