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Re: Disappear.Daily
Hi, quietgirl, welcome to YWS! Is this disappear.daily thing a series you're trying to do? If its not, then I agree with what Stormcloud said: you could have left this ...
Mar 28, 2017 -
Re: Firebreed Chapter 4- Lucky Break
Hi, Awkard! I'm pkid, stopping by for a (hopefully) short review... First Impressions I'm not a fan of the way you wrote this, splitting up the scenes by dates. I ...
Mar 28, 2017 -
Re: Me and My Imagination: Chapter 6, A Risky Guest
Hi um, I don't know how to pronounce your name, so I'll just stick with swizzy. ;P Unfortunately, I haven't read any of the previous chapters so there are a ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: The Water is Kind - Chapter 2: The Email
Hello, hello! So I totally jumped right into this but I have a pretty good idea of the overall story, no worries there. The plot is understandable and I love ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: I Had The Writers Slump
Hey babymagic, I'm not quite sure how to review this since it isn't exactly a work and you could have gotten away with it as a blog or whatnot, but ...
Mar 26, 2017 -
Re: Blessed
This was certainly somewhat of an intense story, Aly! I'm certainly not one of those apocalypse or zombie-domination freaks but I kind of liked this story. And, that you should ...
Mar 25, 2017 -
Re: An Open Letter To My Greatest Crush (3/20/17)
Wow. I honestly do not know what to say. This is just so beautiful. To be quite honest with you, I had a little flashback of my own writings in ...
Mar 24, 2017 -
Re: Goodbye, Father
Good afternoon, Rose. Can I just share my thoughts with you on this piece? It's very beautiful and poignant, yet I enjoyed it in a strange way. You've somehow managed ...
Mar 23, 2017 -
Re: A Simple Meeting
Can I just drop in and say a few things, chhlove? Fun fact: I love books, too. ;P First off, I don't know if you intended that huge, blank space ...
Mar 20, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 1> The moon
Hello Aries! I thought I'd stop by and review this, seeing how interesting it looks. Oh my word, I love your profile picture, even though its not a profile picture... ...
Mar 9, 2017 -
Re: you can be king again - 1.3
Hey Ash, you got the kid here dropping in for a (hopefully) quick review. I read the first chapter of this story and ended up skipping the second but I'm ...
Mar 8, 2017 -
Re: My 2 Sentence Horror Stories
Hey Kara, I'm just dropping in for a short review though usually, whenever I say that it ends up being WAY too long. I don't know - were you looking ...
Mar 7, 2017 -
Re: Anointing of the Sick
Hello there, vaders. I hope you're doing good today. I know I am. : ) This was a very interesting story and I thoroughly enjoyed it. These kind of fables ...
Mar 4, 2017 -
Re: Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 7
Alright no formalities this time ( I know who you are, you know who I am) so let me just jump in with Thoughts on the 1st Section She cut ...
Mar 1, 2017 -
Re: After he left the revised version
Hey Charlotte, you got a review coming at you from the chick! ; ) How are you doing? Great, I hope. This story is somewhat sad... but beautiful. (Also very ...
Feb 27, 2017
