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  • Short Story » Other, Other Re: Just a Fan

    Hi taytay20016! Congratulations on posting your first work, and a huge welcome to YWS! :) The previous reviewers mentioned all the grammatical errors, but I still wanted to throw in ...

    Sep 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Dear Bud, This is True.

    I'm not entirely sure why I decided to read this while listening to some melancholy, soft song on YouTube. Yeah. I basically started bawling. This was so sweet and touching. ...

    Sep 20, 2017
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Gilded Man

    Heya there, Chaser, and Happy #Revmo! This was quite a fascinating story, I have to admit, and I thought you wrote it splendidly. You were very descriptive, and used some ...

    Sep 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Of Illnesses And Antidotes - Chapter Four

    Ooooh, creeepy... This Dr. Sullivan does not sound like a good guy. And AHA! I have another nugget of information into the hows and whys of this story: the doctor ...

    Sep 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: gutted

    Hiii soundofmind!! Um. I don't really review poetry/lyrics - actually, I usually run in the opposite direction when I see it. But I kinda wanted to read your sick rap, ...

    Sep 17, 2017
  • Art » Fanfiction, General Re: Yellowfang's Exile

    Hi Gymnast! I've never reviewed art before, but I always wanted to give it a shot, so here goes. I think you did really well at conveying how dark and ...

    Sep 16, 2017
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: The Realm of Lousy Characters, Intro Part 2

    Hiii aj! Yup, I'm back and a trifle bit disappointed I couldn't help kick this out of the Green Room. But ah well, who doesn't like a third review? Okay. ...

    Sep 15, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: The Trees Sing

    I see you're fairly new here, so welcome to the YWS! :) I hope you enjoy your time. This is a lovely poem. I like the imagery of the wind ...

    Sep 15, 2017
  • Other » General, General Re: Trailing Stardust

    Hi AliceinBluue, and welcome to the YWS! I hope you enjoy your stay here, and I'm also happy to see you've posted your first work. That's always exciting. (: But, ...

    Sep 15, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Oh, Cherry Blossom: Chapter 1

    Well. This was interesting! :0 A little unexpected for me though that foreboding opening paragraph gave plenty of hints. I feel kind of lost on the time and setting of ...

    Sep 14, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 38

    Hello jamgalloway! You know, I've seen chapters of this series around a bunch, but never actually reviewed any of it. (so pardon me if I get something wrong here) I ...

    Sep 13, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Mage and The Immortal Chapter 6

    Hi Thundahguy! Yup, it's me again :D here to review another chapter for you. Nit-picky stuff Despite such a widespread attack, only an advance force of bandits had entered the ...

    Sep 12, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Ordadus [3.1]

    Heya Wolfical! rosette here for a quick review. :^) (I, unfortunately, have not read any previous chapters, so pardon me if I get something horribly wrong). To begin with, I ...

    Sep 12, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: The Light Maiden's Mark, Chapter 6 - Black Blood

    Hello AnieDoru! I'm happy to see you've posted another chapter, and are continuing your novel thus far. :) As usual, I will be sharing my thoughts and dropping in some ...

    Sep 12, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Of Illnesses And Antidotes - Chapter Three

    Happy Sunday, KayLou! Yup, rosette is back and ready to review. :) Just to let you know, I am completely enthralled with this story as of right now. There's two ...

    Sep 10, 2017


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