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Re: Just a Fan
Hi taytay20016! Congratulations on posting your first work, and a huge welcome to YWS! :) The previous reviewers mentioned all the grammatical errors, but I still wanted to throw in ...
Sep 20, 2017 -
Re: Dear Bud, This is True.
I'm not entirely sure why I decided to read this while listening to some melancholy, soft song on YouTube. Yeah. I basically started bawling. This was so sweet and touching. ...
Sep 20, 2017 -
Re: The Gilded Man
Heya there, Chaser, and Happy #Revmo! This was quite a fascinating story, I have to admit, and I thought you wrote it splendidly. You were very descriptive, and used some ...
Sep 18, 2017 -
Re: Of Illnesses And Antidotes - Chapter Four
Ooooh, creeepy... This Dr. Sullivan does not sound like a good guy. And AHA! I have another nugget of information into the hows and whys of this story: the doctor ...
Sep 18, 2017 -
Re: gutted
Hiii soundofmind!! Um. I don't really review poetry/lyrics - actually, I usually run in the opposite direction when I see it. But I kinda wanted to read your sick rap, ...
Sep 17, 2017 -
Re: Yellowfang's Exile
Hi Gymnast! I've never reviewed art before, but I always wanted to give it a shot, so here goes. I think you did really well at conveying how dark and ...
Sep 16, 2017 -
Re: The Realm of Lousy Characters, Intro Part 2
Hiii aj! Yup, I'm back and a trifle bit disappointed I couldn't help kick this out of the Green Room. But ah well, who doesn't like a third review? Okay. ...
Sep 15, 2017 -
Re: The Trees Sing
I see you're fairly new here, so welcome to the YWS! :) I hope you enjoy your time. This is a lovely poem. I like the imagery of the wind ...
Sep 15, 2017 -
Re: Trailing Stardust
Hi AliceinBluue, and welcome to the YWS! I hope you enjoy your stay here, and I'm also happy to see you've posted your first work. That's always exciting. (: But, ...
Sep 15, 2017 -
Re: Oh, Cherry Blossom: Chapter 1
Well. This was interesting! :0 A little unexpected for me though that foreboding opening paragraph gave plenty of hints. I feel kind of lost on the time and setting of ...
Sep 14, 2017 -
Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 38
Hello jamgalloway! You know, I've seen chapters of this series around a bunch, but never actually reviewed any of it. (so pardon me if I get something wrong here) I ...
Sep 13, 2017 -
Re: The Mage and The Immortal Chapter 6
Hi Thundahguy! Yup, it's me again :D here to review another chapter for you. Nit-picky stuff Despite such a widespread attack, only an advance force of bandits had entered the ...
Sep 12, 2017 -
Re: Ordadus [3.1]
Heya Wolfical! rosette here for a quick review. :^) (I, unfortunately, have not read any previous chapters, so pardon me if I get something horribly wrong). To begin with, I ...
Sep 12, 2017 -
Re: The Light Maiden's Mark, Chapter 6 - Black Blood
Hello AnieDoru! I'm happy to see you've posted another chapter, and are continuing your novel thus far. :) As usual, I will be sharing my thoughts and dropping in some ...
Sep 12, 2017 -
Re: Of Illnesses And Antidotes - Chapter Three
Happy Sunday, KayLou! Yup, rosette is back and ready to review. :) Just to let you know, I am completely enthralled with this story as of right now. There's two ...
Sep 10, 2017
