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Re: Deity Project: Theme III - Love
Hi saentiel! I hope you're doing fantastically. :) I haven't reviewed in a bit, so I feel a little rusty, and I'm also not the best at poetry, but please ...
Nov 5, 2017 -
Re: The Mage and The Immortal Chapter 9
Hey Thundahguy! Sorry it took so long to get around to reviewing this. :( Life has been hectic. BUT - in good news... You figured out how to post this ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: Of Illnesses And Antidotes - Chapter Seven
Ooooh! You mean to tell me this story is in the future! WHY did I not even CONSIDER that before?!! Okay, so this is really fascinating, and I was trying ...
Oct 23, 2017 -
Re: Three Words For You
Hello there! rosette here for a hopefully short review. :) To begin with, I found this very encouraging. It touched my heart in a strange sort of way, but literary ...
Oct 16, 2017 -
Re: The Light at Dawn
Wow! This is beautiful! I don't know who these characters are, and what this fanfiction is based off of, but your writing is excellent. The opening paragraph was so soft ...
Oct 11, 2017 -
Re: Stray part 3 / A fictional tale from the perspective of a street dog
Hi Laurenlovely! Yes, I'm back for more. :) I saw this sitting in the Green Room, and couldn't resist dropping in for a review. I think I mentioned plenty of ...
Oct 9, 2017 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 6.2)
Okay. Maeve has seriously caught my interest by now. I originally thought she was some mean and bossy captain, trying to prove a female can be in charge of a ...
Oct 7, 2017 -
Re: The Mage and The Immortal Chapter 8
Woah. Dirk. What happened, man?!! Like, FIIREEE. No more eccentric yet friendly man? He just threw off that facade? Now, he's all mean and strict? Craziness, I tell you. But ...
Oct 4, 2017 -
Re: Of Illnesses And Antidotes - Chapter Six
Yay! Another chapter! I actually told myself when RevMo ended that I would not review for however long it took for me to recover. But look how that turned out. ...
Oct 2, 2017 -
Re: Emotional Things
Hi LukeStarkiller! Hey, it's great you decided to share a poem even if it is, as you say, overly-dramatic-to-the-point-of-ridiculousness. I didn't find it overly dramatic, just confusing. You use so ...
Sep 30, 2017 -
Re: Blue Cell Phone
Hey Lumos, and Happy almost-the-end-of #RevMo! This was certainly a unique story. Definitely different for me. There's this guy, Eli, who gets kicked out of his friend's house because of ...
Sep 30, 2017 -
Re: Who Am I?
Hey there AliceinBluue! Just dropping in for my 48th/50 reviews for this month. :D This is an interesting topic! I love the repetition of the questions, and each different and ...
Sep 29, 2017 -
Re: Moments Of Life
Hi Taslimalima! Also: Happy #RevMo! I'm currently attempting to get in my 50 reviews, so I thought I'd review this. :D Grammar Stuff The first thing that pops out to ...
Sep 29, 2017 -
Re: Hillary
Fascinating poem, Mr. President! I think you conveyed your thoughts of Hillary accurately, and I must admit, I could just hear your voice saying these words as I was reading ...
Sep 28, 2017 -
Re: Anchor of my Soul
Hi, Wakiya! Also, allow me to give you a huge Welcome! to the YWS :) But, moving on... What a lovely song! This is really good for being your first ...
Sep 28, 2017
