Three Words For You

by DeerInBacPac

Published October 14, 2017

E - Everyone

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  You are supercalifragilisticexpialidocious.  

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IzzyIsHappy
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IzzyIsHappy commented Comment · Nov 13, 2017

Best piece of literature ever

ThemagicalEbonyFox wrote a review Review · Oct 29, 2017

Hi there Flumadiddle! Happy review day! Again!
So, I found this piece really beautiful and meaningful. It's clear you put a lot of thought into the language you chose to use. Each of the words have been chosen for effect. As far as meaning goes, I think that this poem is a metaphor for the positive messages in every day life that are hidden by the propaganda we've been spoon-fed since birth. It's really inspiring that you've decided to post this.

All jokes aside, I thought this was really clever. I wasn't sure what I was expecting, but this has given me the motivation to keep on reviewing.
Keep writing!
Ebony

Thanks! I posted this as something in hopes to make someones day just a little bit better, but you could also take it the way you did, now that I think about it.

Missymisunderstood commented Comment · Oct 17, 2017

LOL, This did make my day. Now I'm all giddy inside <3
Thank You!!

No problem Missy!

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zaminami
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zaminami commented Comment · Oct 16, 2017

eVEN THOUGH THE SOUND OF IT IS SOMETHING QUITE ATROCIOUS

SUPERCALIFRAGILISTICEXPIALIDOCIOUS!!!

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alliyah
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alliyah wrote a review Review · Oct 16, 2017

Hi Flumadiddle! I just read your recent piece, and had to stop by to leave my thoughts.

So, I like the word choice in this piece! You could play a bit more with the line-breaks and other stylistic choices but the main message/theme is pretty clear and concise. I like that this is not what I expected when I saw the title though! I was sort of going through my mind a list of odd things one could say in three words. But that overall created a humorous effect because you didn't give away the punch-line within the title itself.

If you have any questions about my review, don't hesitate to reach out!

~alliyah

No problem!

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rosette
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rosette wrote a review Review · Oct 16, 2017

Hello there!
rosette here for a hopefully short review. :)

To begin with, I found this very encouraging. It touched my heart in a strange sort of way, but literary works have tend to do that to a person sometimes. Your title was fitting, and I just want to say, I don't think you could have chosen a better one. Also, I'm a huge fan of your ending (that last word), so naturally, I loved this.

Grammatically speaking, I thought this was great. But was there some deep and important reasoning behind that space before the first word? :0

As for the work in general, I thought it could have been a little more descriptive and informative, BUT then again, you did say it was only 3 words for us... I didn't expect you to take it so literally. xD This whole review is practically a joke. But this "work" is kind of a joke. :P

Thank you for sharing it with us.
It really did make me smile.
Honestly.

~rosette <3

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CaptainPanda13 commented Comment · Oct 15, 2017

You are supercalifragilisticexpialidocious.
Other long words include:
Pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanoconiosis - A Lung Disease
Floccinaucinihilipilification.
Antidisestablishmentarianism














































































You are welcome...

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woahhitherepal
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woahhitherepal commented Comment · Oct 15, 2017

Hello I'm here to review (:

I honestly thought this was going to be something cool, and what I got was so much better.
I love this.
Good job.
have a grand day (:
>Adrian

Thank you! Have a grand day as well! Also, FIRST STAR! WOOOO!

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DeerInBacPac
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DeerInBacPac commented Comment · Oct 14, 2017

@DemonGoddess @DarkPandemonium

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PastelSlushie
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PastelSlushie wrote a review Review · Oct 14, 2017

Hi there, Pastel here for a hopefully helpful review and some comments! I won’t be able to give a full length proper review, so I’ll just make a couple of comments.

I feel like I just got clickbaited, but in a good way. I thought it was going to say something like “I love you” or “You are loved” or something like that. Hmm, you turned that on its head. Bravo. That also must have been some dedication to spell out that whole entire word - again, bravo. Unless you copied and pasted it - but still.

And thank you, you are also supercalifragilisticexpialidocious,

Pastel

Thank you Pastel! Yes, I promise you, I did take the time to spell out supercalifragilisticexpialidocious!



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