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Re: Honeymoon in Mars-Episode8(The conspiracy at Articus Base 1)
Thanks Birkhoff for reviewing the entire series and taking so much pain, I knew the writing was not upto the standards that you were expecting but I am not a ...
Jan 27, 2014 -
Re: Honeymoon in Mars-Episode9(A day to Gamble at Articus Base 2)
Is this the only paragraph which is a cause of concern for you?
Jan 24, 2014 -
Re: Halcyon days
I took only 5 minutes...
Jan 3, 2014 -
Re: Honeymoon in Mars-Episode9(A day to Gamble at Articus Base 2)
Thanks, do read other chapters
Dec 31, 2013 -
Re: Machine City Chapter 1 Part 3
No, haven't read yet but I shall read chapter 1 soon.
Dec 30, 2013 -
Re: Anastasia Loves You
Ok nice piece of poetry. keep writing ATB
Dec 26, 2013 -
Re: The Passages of Time
The piece of poetry looks realistic. It may make you realize that life is not a bed of roses but bed of **** or whatever The flow is good even ...
Dec 26, 2013 -
Re: Honeymoon in Mars-Episode8(The conspiracy at Articus Base 1)
ok,thanks
Dec 26, 2013 -
Re: Letters Have Letters
OK, nice piece. Quickly skimmed through it like Keep writing. ATB
Dec 25, 2013 -
Re: that boy
Keep writing pieces like this one. All the very best. never leave and never betray.
Dec 25, 2013 -
Re: Covenant
Hi rikki here for a review. The piece seems very gloomy and less joyful on the inside. Is it meant to reveal out basic agony in life. But you have ...
Dec 25, 2013 -
Re: Honeymoon in Mars-Episode7(The Articus Voyage - Part3 - Decode the Code)
sorry, it is 3000 A.D. and not B.C.
Dec 24, 2013 -
Re: Honeymoon in Mars-Episode7(The Articus Voyage - Part3 - Decode the Code)
Sorry, it is 3000 A.D.
Dec 24, 2013 -
Re: Honeymoon in Mars-Episode7(The Articus Voyage - Part3 - Decode the Code)
Kindly illustrate
Dec 24, 2013 -
Re: Honeymoon in Mars-Episode7(The Articus Voyage - Part3 - Decode the Code)
What basic coding? These were introduced to illustrate the technical expertise of the two men. They work in labs and are no commoners,hence introduced imaginary coding script that might be ...
Dec 24, 2013