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  • Other » General, General Re: [deleted]

    Did the man just turn into a GHOST?!?!?

    Oct 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: photosynthesis

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    Wow, this is a wonderful poem! The rhyming scheme is amazing, by the way, I love your username. Anyway, you can ignore what I’m about to point out if you ...

    Oct 6, 2020
  • Art » Other, Other Re: Masjid Hamzah

    Wow, nice poem, though you could have removed the removed the repeated sentence at this particular line I miss my masjid hamzah Shadow was the cat's name, I miss my ...

    Oct 3, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: there is no failure without 'i'

    I didn’t understand this at all, I was not able to understand it AT ALL, I never am good at reading this type of things. Can you explain?

    Oct 3, 2020
  • Art » General, General Re: Hiiiii. I’m new, and so here’s a little something to get to know me...

    Hi! Welcome baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack! I can’t wait to read your work! And, I would love if you give me some tips on writing better, as I really want to write a ...

    Oct 3, 2020
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Spiritual Re: Destiny

    I liked it a lot, you chose to write about a very interesting topic, and the rhyming is perfect! It could’ve been a bit longer (hope this isn’t offensive) and, ...

    Oct 1, 2020
  • Art » General, General Re: Nerds

    Sorry, I didn%u2019t mean to send 2 replies

    Sep 26, 2020
  • Art » General, General Re: Nerds

    Well, in the poem, the nerd isn%u2019t just shunning the people who aren%u2019t, but instead, facing the bullies who bully the nerd. And, you were absolutely correct about not losing ...

    Sep 26, 2020
  • Art » General, General Re: Nerds

    Well, in the poem, the nerd isn%u2019t just shunning the people who aren%u2019t, but instead, facing the bullies who bully the nerd. And, you were absolutely correct about not losing ...

    Sep 26, 2020
  • Art » General, General Re: Nerds

    Thank you so much! I will edit it, thank you! :)

    Sep 25, 2020
  • Art » General, General Re: Nerds

    Thank you so much! And, when I was writing, I did have a doubt in that line, but I felt it was much better then- I%u2019m the best, special, even ...

    Sep 25, 2020
  • Art » General, General Re: Nerds

    This should be in the poems section, but it did not show other options except for art,

    Sep 24, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Medieval Story

    Hi! This poem is wonderful, I really enjoy fantasy, poems and stories, The flow was amazing, and I look forward to more of these type of poems

    Sep 21, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Next Door

    Is this a real story? ‘Cause you sent this in the blog too. But it’s really spooky, it was very strange....... I felt goosebumps too when I finished reading this.... ...

    Sep 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Paronoia

    I love the message this poem is giving, but I think you missed an extra ‘o’ in the word ‘to’ . I look forward to more poems, keep writing! ( ...

    Sep 20, 2020


You have to be a bit of a liar to tell a story the right way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind