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riancarthy

  • Poetry » Health, Narrative Re: Lost

    Hi @ImmaPerson321, where do I even start?! This poem is simply beautiful. I absolutely loved the concept and I liked how instead of using a person, you used a sea ...

    Sep 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: falling in a forest

    Hey @Magestorrow Wow! I actually liked the vibe to that poem. It was killer small but killer good! I liked the setting 'forest-y' vibe. I could feel your calmness as ...

    Sep 25, 2019
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Was It My Imagination??

    Hey !! I really really enjoyed this. It literally had me on the edge of my seat the whole. damn. thing. What lured me in was the title and also ...

    Aug 2, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: Monsoon!!

    Hey !! This poem is very nice and i loved it just a small mistake or improvement would be the rhyming bits. I loved the opening like @Awru but i ...

    Aug 2, 2019
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Doppelganger

    Hey ! I was hooked since the start of the story. The title really pulled me in and I congratulate you for such a good story! It scared me a ...

    Aug 2, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fly me

    Hey! I thought this poem was very nice! From the flow, to the title, it was lovely. I agree with @flamingphoenix , the title did suit the actual poem very ...

    Aug 2, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Happy Friendship

    Hey! What brought me to this poem as I was scrolling was the title. I thought "Happy Friendship" brought me in as it is a nice, friendly, warm title. I ...

    Aug 2, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, Dramatic Re: Puppet

    Wow Daria, this is an amazing, remarkable poem. I was intrigued since the moment i started reading the first few words. You have put it together very very nicely! I ...

    Aug 1, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Pop tunes

    I found it strange how these few lines could have such an impact on me. You really delivered and I thought the flow was quite good. I really couldn't find ...

    Aug 1, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Good and Evil

    Hey! I liked this poem. I loved how you went about the, 'when something good happens in life, something bad will always happen,' vibe! I actually really enjoyed it and ...

    Jul 31, 2019
  • Short Story » Culture, Dramatic Re: Never Give Up

    This was a nice short story. About belief, I thought it really opened my eyes and I loved how Joyful grew up to be a doctor and help others. It ...

    Jul 31, 2019
  • Short Story » Humor, Other Re: Jason's Math

    Nice little short story. A bit funny and I liked some of the details. I found it very imaginable in my head. I just failed to understand the plot, 'two ...

    Jul 31, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Waiting

    What a nice poem. I could feel your pain and sadness as it went on. I felt the story in the poem and it really made me think about horrible ...

    Jul 12, 2019


I think the more you understand myths, the more you understand the roots of our culture and the more things will resonate.
— Rick Riordan