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Oh my goodness, thanks so much! I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks for the nice review.

Becca! Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you like it, and glad that someone else is around to know just what I'm talking about. That's pretty cool, you get to know ...

I think iniquities does play in though. Iniquities are wrong-doings, it's wrong for a little kid to grow up knowing when he's going to die.

Thanks for reviewing. Haha, no that wasn't the meaning, but I think I like your take on it. I know that there isn't much to hint at linonophobia, but I ...

Hey Purple. I know, it's kind of odd. It's kind of hard to explain, but it does have a greater meaning to me, but was literally inspired by some random ...

Ah, well perhaps I can help you fix that. To start a new line within a stanza, use shift enter, it'll get rid of that double space. Then, just use ...

Glad to help! I didn't want to offend if it had been intentional (I had someone decide that my intentional line breaks and use of white space must have been ...

lots of poets do that, E.E. Cummings comes to mind. Poetry is all about the visual appeal. That white space and line breaking controls how my poem is read, and ...

Thanks as always! Never would I think of you as some old man for that, I'm glad someone else appreciates it. Sometimes I feel like people are over the nature-y ...

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. Haha, I do, and I have several more love-y poems if ever you need a pick me up. Thanks again!

Thanks for catching that, hate missing typos like that. I'm glad you liked it, thanks for your always sweet and helpful reviews!

Thank you for your review, I'm glad you liked it! "a few" referred to a few poems. Thank you so much for catching that its it's mix-up, every now and ...

Yes, you got it perfectly! I'm so glad to have someone see something more than me "putting down" their God. I love slap-in-the-face poems too, and I have to respect ...

Well, I'm sorry that you think the line breaks are disastrous because they are entirely intentional. Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you can relate.

Thank you so much for all the reviews. I fixed up according to all your suggestions. With the door bit, I hadn't meant to say "inside", I'd meant to say ...