rhiasofia

I like the way you embraced this topic. It wasn't overwhelming or too suffocatingly depressing as they often are, but managed to feel informative yet still personal. I am happy ...

This is such a sad, but strong, heart-wrenching bit of writing. Your wording and transitions were all really smooth, the whole poem flowed very nicely. The only thing I have ...

Wow, this is a lengthy poem. Let's see if I can be of assistance in reviewing :) "caught up, shut up, when you show your disguise, and even more so ...

I love that someone is going out there and trying to help people with this problem in a new, different way. I think too often they hear that it is ...

Ah, don't we all know what it's like to want to break free of being perfect, when someone thinks we're just ideal in every way, and we know they're so ...

Hello there, review time! "Because love does not work for the worse, The worse works for love" Those two lines. Those two lines just made the piece. They caught my ...

Hey there, review time! There is so much honesty and feeling to this piece, and it really struck me deep. I know that I've evoked the kind of pain that ...

As a fellow Whovian, I have to say that seeing all these poems commemorated to DOctor Who excite me so much! Not done reading them all yet, but I've enjoyed ...

Hello, review time! Seems like we're both pretty new to this site. Hope you're enjoying it, too. This poem possesses such a wonderful rhythm, and it makes it feel so ...

Hey there, review time! Okay, first and foremost, I really liked this. Before I begin complimenting you, one bit stuck out as not flowing quite right. "And the moon ascends ...

I absolutely love this. It speaks so deeply, I can definitely identify with being a brittle, glass girl, who had difficulty seeing anything in myself, always comparing myself to others, ...

Hi there! I adore the wording of this poem. It's quite daring, the way you words things. I especially like "the fury of mice", and "afloat unlike butterflies pinned." I ...