rhiasofia

Hey there, rhiasofia here to review. I'm going to start with my one nitpick. You've got to capitalize I's in poetry. I'm all about leaving out capitalization intentionally, but not ...

Hey there, review time. I really like how brief this one is, it really works. As for the content, I have to admit that I love this. It's really well ...

Your poetry just always takes my breath away! Your writing style is so fluid, so elegant. All of your poems sound so mature and professional. They really are stunning, I ...

Okay, first I have to point out the one typo I saw. "Taylor-made" should be tailor made. That was the only technical error I saw. I was going to mention ...

I like the vagueness, the sense of mystery. I think poetry should be like that, not all black and white, but subjective. It all sounds perfect together. It is very ...

This is so beautiful. It was heart-achingly beautiful, perhaps even hauntingly so. I loved it. It is very orderly, nice and neat, and clean. You conveyed so much bittersweet sadness, ...

oh, this is so nice. It sounds great, every word of it works so well together. It is so fun, with a nice little taste of whimsy. Also, great imagery! ...

Whew, I feel out of breath and worn out just reading that! You jam-packed so much energy and action in that poem, it's amazing to me. The rushed structure, lack ...

I definitely like the concept here, but it is lacking in flow and rhythm that is so necessary to make your poem hit home. Some famous poets use this stream-of-consciousness ...

This is a really great bit of writing on humans and our legacies. I like the allusions to different historical figures, definitely solidified the idea of leaving a mark. It ...

Wow, I wasn't expecting that twist. Oh, that is really heart-breaking. I'm almost glad it ended that way, though. It wouldn't feel right for it to end the expected way, ...

Ooh, I like this. Exciting, mysterious. Your description of your character in the beginning was so beautiful, and it left me totally unaware of what was coming. Very surprising. It ...

Okay, so, yeah, on the verge of tears here. I have absolutely no critiques. I'm not going to even pretend that this review is going to be anything more than ...

Aww, this is really cute. At times, the alliteration was really good, but then other times it felt a little awkward and forced. I liked most examples of alliteration here, ...

Oooooh, the ending gave me shivers. Very creepy, very well written. I wish it didn't have to be such a brief 1000 words, I would have adored more details. Reminded ...