rhiasofia

Hello magpie, I always look forward to new poems by you to review! So, let's see if I can manage to find any faults with this one, shall we? First ...

Hello hello and good morning to you, lovely! Rhia here to review for you. This is a bit lengthy, so I'm going to go bit by bit, and tell you ...

Hello, rhia here to review! This is cute! It was sweet and funny, nice to read something light when a lot of the stuff here is so heavy. I do ...

Hello, rhia here to review! Alright, so usually I go through and pick at grammar and spelling first, but I couldn't find any mistakes there, so I'll just go through, ...

Hello, rhia here to review this poem for you today, as it has no reviews to speak of. I'll just talk about what I like and dislike as I go ...

Well, Pompadour, I hate to see this lovely poem still left unreviewed. I read it twice yeasterday, cause it was so nice. And although I'm worried that I'll have nothing ...

Hello, rhia here to review. I'll focus on nitpicks, grammar, and sentence correction first, as I read through this. She buried her face in his chest, smelling his sweet nerdy ...

Hello, rhia here to review this poem. I really like when people write prose style poetry, but you do lose the benefit of enjambment and structure for emphasis, so keep ...

Hello, rhia here to review! Ok, first off, everyone else is saying "oh, this isn't poetry because it isn't structured like poetry", but you know what? They can suck it. ...

Hello, rhia here to review! Alright, my first question is about the first line, "January". Is that simply a repetition of the title, or is that actually the first line? ...

Hello, rhia here as promised to review! This is very bleak, and you did a very good job to paint a bleak, depressing image in the mind of the reader, ...

Hello, rhia here to review, as requested. Alright, so on first glance, a few things jump out to me. 1) I see awesome vocabulary already, which makes me excited to ...

Hello, rhia here to review! I'll start with grammar and sentence correction first. by:lyleallissa We already know who this poem is by, because the site adds the author line for ...

Hello, rhia here to review! I'm going to start with grammar and general sentence correction things, then talk about story line things. If I was the same girl I was ...

Hello, rhia here to review! I'll focus on grammar and sentence correction first. Divorce wastes three things , money, time, and love. Bolded comma should be a semicolon rather than ...