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If you type it using shift+enter, the double spacing will go away, and you can just use the plain old enter to leave a space for the stanzas :). It's ...

Hey there Purple! Oof, this one hits home. I'm there with you, girl. My dad's gone, and my step dad and I, well, we don't always get on. So, I'm ...

I can also really relate to this. My biological dad left me when I was in 5th grade, and me and my step-dad are a constant struggle. He and my ...

Wait, I couldn't really tell...you like Valentine's Day, right? Just kidding XD. Sorry. My humor...kinda sucks But anyways, gonna review this. Now, I like prose style formatting, but with this ...

Hello, Rhia here to review! So, I usually don't prefer self-harm poems, I feel that they're a little overdone, so I like that this one was you battling against the ...

Awwww! Saddness! I love the entire thing, and how it slowly feels more and more frustrated and annoyed, and desperate, as you go along. I don't have much to say, ...

Hey there Purple, my pal. I realized that there are new poems by you unreviewed by me, so as promised, I'm gonna review real quick like. I really like the ...

Awww, you don't even know what a big smile this put on my face. You did such a good job with this, and it is so natural and heartfelt. It ...

Hello, Rhia here to review this nice short poem on this lovely review day! Alrighty, as per norm, I'm going to start with nitpicks and ideas for improvement. Nitpicks/ideas for ...

Hello, Rhia here to review on this lovely review day. I will start with my nitpicks and suggestions: The violin’s wailing notes as a baby arrives The deep booming of ...

Hey there, Rhia here to review for review day :) Nitpicks first I'm telling you softly, so no-one overhears. No one doesn't have a hyphen, it's just two words. Through ...

Hey there, Rhia here to review. I read these on Valentine's day, and they made me laugh, and now I'm back to actually review. Nitpicks first: In Stand By Me: ...

Hey there, Rhia here to review! Nitpicks first. Okay, so I hate when people think you have to have punctuation, so I'm not going to tell you that you should ...

I like this, how it's in more of the prose style. It lacks the formatting of poetry, but still has the elegance of rhetoric that a poem does. I really ...

Hey there, Rhia here to review. As I am not religious at all, I am going to review this solely from a perspective of grammar and wording, as I am ...