retrodisco666

Maybe you should learn the difference between vindictive and mean. There is one thing to dislike a review it is another thing to outright insult them.

P.s. People do end sentences with so like that. Don't assume my own dialect

Hey. I attempted to use the disjointed punctuation as an extension of the mind of the reader. The short, uneven, and unfinished sentences are purposely chose so that the reader ...

Thanks for the review! And wish your club the best of luck, and tell them from a gay on the other side of the pond that we will always route ...

Hi. You are being a tad bit rude but that's fine i can deal with it. I just want to say that there is a point of there being no ...

Hey. I like the concept behind it and i think that you have a really good idea, my issue is with the word entwining. I think something like erupting or ...

Hey there! I rather like this poem. You have a good narrative structure, and the repetition of "too" brings out your confusion. And the repetition of the would i die, ...

Hey, The improvements work in my opinion. I love it, and you should use your darker side more often, as you use it well. Excellent work, as always. ~Retro Disco666

Hi, I went through after and checked off the ones I've done! If this was my bucket list, I would be halfway to dead :s cary thoughts. Fun read though! ...

Miss, I truly loved it. It made me laugh(as you heard) It had good meter and you made the rhyme work, and it helps that I get the joke! Love, ...

Hey, The content was good but difficult to read as it was just one big bit of text. I would break it up into stanzas and then try and change ...

Hey, Woo! Society hates me. Thank you deary. It is such a cute little idea which I may steal at some point XD Well written as well actually so well ...

Thank you for your comments

Hey, I like the concept but for it truly to be a sonnet I think you need to work it into Iambic pentameter. This would also improve the flow aspect ...

Hey, This poem, wasn't really a poem. It was a list. And didn't really have much to it. . . . I think you need to go through it and ...