Published November 12, 2010
You are Music
You’re as tender as a Love song
Rebellious as Hip-hop
Sweet as a Lullaby
Insane as Rock
Spiritual as Gospel
Risqué like Dancehall
Soulful as Jazz
Upbeat like Techno
Emotional like the Blues
Vibrant as Reggae
Wild like Soca
Hip as Country
Impromptu as Rap
Mixed-up as Dub
Conservative as a Folksong
Loyal as an Anthem
Thoughtful as Conscious
Feisty as Chutney
Playful as a Nursery Rhyme
Sophisticated as the Classics
You are generic
You are unspecific
You are like music
Everyone loves your magic.
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Hiya!
Well I am in the imbetween. (:
It was indeed a little list like... but still...
It was VERRRRRRY creative... and cool! I liked how you put together each style of music... some I have nevvverheard of... and put it together.
But... it was also a little list-y... I would maybe say to find a better catagory if there is one... if there isn't... then keep it here no matter what they sayy! Because it was creative, and very likable!
Over all..
*LIKE!*
Hi I actually like it. I don't agree with people saying that you need to put it in the poem format because in my opinion poems shouldn't be cliche or stereotyped this is the beauty behind them. I like the way you related the characteristics of who you was talking about with music it was actually nice.A list would be saying: you are tender,you are rebellious, you are this and that but for who listens to music they would be able to imagine what you are saying
Hey, thank you guys for commenting.
I know it was a bit like a list, but it was really to show the comparison between the various type of music and individuals personality. I enjoyed writing it. It was playful to me.
To those of you who have never heard of a few of these types of music, just explore. I'm from Tobago and we have a wide variety of music.
Saying thank you again
---Des
This was kind of different for me, but I think I liked it? So what if there wasn't a lot of emotion thrown into it, it was different, and creative writing is all about what you feel! I liked the repetition, personally, it really nailed the idea that you were describing a person into my head. Keep up the good work (:
Hey there! I'm going to have to agree with Warriorprincess on this, this was good! I thought that you used the different styles of music well to describe someone. Keep it up!
~Luxy
I strongly disagree with the above posts. I loved this! So it was a little list-y, but so what? I like how you characterize each type of music (a few of which I'd never even heard of!). I also thought the bold print added a nice creative touch. *Likes*
RetroDisco was right, it was more like a list. I didn't show any emotion at all. A poem needs more than metaphor. It needs emotion, detail, your senses. I'm not great at writing poetry, but I know things it needs. Sorry, maybe you should try putting it in poem form. Keep writing.
Hey,
This poem, wasn't really a poem. It was a list. And didn't really have much to it. . . . I think you need to go through it and make it more poetic as at the moment it doesn't stand at and doesn't feel like anything special.
Sorry for the nagativity.
~Retro Disco666
Hey,
This poem, wasn't really a poem. It was a list. And didn't really have much to it. . . . I think you need to go through it and make it more poetic as at the moment it doesn't stand at and doesn't feel like anything special.
Sorry for the nagativity.
~Retro Disco666