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Re: Gay
Hello! Retro here for a review! And I must say it is nice to find another LGBTQ+ supporter! Well onto the review, first I'll do a few nitpicks then onto ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: Sweet Memories That Are Now Nothing
Hello, Retro here :D I'm going to do a few nitpicks then talk about what I liked, okay? :) ' Remember those sweet memories that have faded into nothing? Their ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: Faith.
Hey Retro here for a review! Now, I don't usually review prose at all so please bare with me! :D I'm going to do a few nitpicks then talk about ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: A Fruitless Battle
Hey, Retro here for a review :) First off i'll do some nitpicks, then talk about what I liked, okay? :) ' But it can also be floods, Of crimson ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: Identity
Hello! Retro here for a review :D I myself am known for writing LGBTQ+ poems, so naturally this spoke to me. I'll do one or two nitpicks then talk about ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: ​Pitter Patter
Hey, Retro here for a review :) First of i'll do nitpicks, then talk about what I liked, okay? :) 'they fall like I did to the ground' The to ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: Magpie
Hey! Retro here for a wee review :) I'll do some nitpicks then talk about what I like, okay? :) First thing, if you're going to use that i at ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: When I Say "Flawless"
Hey! Retro here for a review :D I know you say you want criticism but i'm not one for destroying a poem completely, that being said I will do some ...
May 1, 2014 -
Re: absolution
Hey Retro here for a review! First of I'll do nitpicks then talk about what I liked, okay? :) Now, this is important to me; consistancy. Some of your stanzas ...
May 1, 2014 -
Re: Untitled No. 1
Hello there! Retro here as requested! :D First of i'm going to do a few nitpicks, then talk about what I liked, okay? :) The first thing I'm going to ...
May 1, 2014 -
Re: i loved you four hundred and seventy days
Hello dear sparks, Retro here for a review. This was absolutely breath taking, i'll talk through a few bits first though and then get back to what I loved :) ...
Apr 23, 2014 -
Re: A Letter To My Mother About My Virginity
Hey! Retro here for a review :D First I shall do some nitpicks then talk about what I liked, okay? 'Even my shadow is different now, crawling deeper into the ...
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: The Differences Between the Seasons
Hello Retro here for a wee review :) First off but i'll do some nitpicks and then talk about everything which I loved, okay? :) '...a chill indifference' I think ...
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: Petra
Hey! Retro here for a review :) Usually in my reviews I do nitpicks to start with but I cannot find a single one. This is grammatically perfect so Kudos ...
Apr 14, 2014 -
Re: Pomegranates
Hey Retro here for a review. First off I'll do some nitpicks then talk about what I liked, okay? :D 'standing with legs like spears, and hands like manacles.' I ...
Apr 12, 2014