rememberme

This was a one of a kind piece, for sure. I have never before seen a story like this on young writers. I like it though, that your piece dares ...

This doesn't quite make sense. That might sound harsh, but this is a hard piece to follow. You should definately add more to it. Put some more detail in there. ...

Ooo this was nice. Very nice. Short, bare and to the point. I like that you were so direct, it's hard to get your point across in such little detail, ...

I thought this was good, not as terrific as some of your other work, but none the less, good. I like the story line, even though at times it felt ...

I am, a black satin ribbon twisted into a smile on the cold cement . A whisper at midnight, between cupped hands and flash lit lovers . Like the moment ...

I really did like this. It was a tad too short. You needed to give your audience some closure for sure. You had a lot of big words put together ...

This poem was good. But if you ask me, it made no sense, probably because you didnt have a story line or plot. What are you talking about? Is this ...

Do you remember? For years I tried to forget.But I couldn’t give up, my heart said “Not yet.” For years I pushed your memory aside.Even believed my love, for you ...

This poem pulled me in. It made me want to read more by you're first couple of lines. That's a good start for a story, you want to pull the ...

This was.. quite alright. I sense that you wrote this in quite a hurry. ? Whatever the case, it's fine; but definately not you're best work. You didn't give good ...

This peice describes my cutting addiction, in like three short paragraphs. I couldnt explain it, I didnt want to do it, but I did. One thing led to another and ...

This story, it's about you isn't it? It seems like a personal take on the inside of somebodys feelings, you wouldn't even have to tell me, that this story was ...

I really loved this! You're amazing at rhyming and creating a rhyming scheme that you can stick too. I see no problems with this at all! It's simply brilliant, and ...

This story was so beautiful. It almost made me cry. You had so much depth and emotion attached to every diary entry. I loved the beginnning it was my faveorite. ...

I thought you had a good story line. A devil, an angel, forbidden love. That's always a good story starter. But I think you could have done a lot more ...