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Re: Because You Don’t See Me
First of all, I wanted to start off by saying that this was very well written. But i don't like how you used some of the words in here like ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Excuses
I really liked the poem. But I think you need to add some punctuation in your stanza's so that everybody can tell when a stanza begins and ends. And also, ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: No name
I agree with the previous reviewers... you should extend this to further the poem. But overall, I think you have an amazing beginning. To extend and make this longer you ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Filled
Wow :O you had good usage of sensory detail...I felt like I was there with you experiencing what you were. This is one of the many things that makes a ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Infected With You
Hey there:) First of all, I want to start by saying that I love the way you wrote the poem and the way it was structured. The words really spoke ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: Missing You
I honestly like this poem because I can relate to what its like to still be in love with someone. I kind of liked the structure of the poem but ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: Who Will Cry
Hi there:) I'm gonna start off by saying I loved this poem and I thought your rhyming was really good. The words really spoke to me and I thought it ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: Stand Up
Wow :O When I read that all the words just flowed into place and went together beautifully. I find it hard to find poems that I really like but, this ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Always and forever
Quick comment:) I really liked this poem and I wouldn't change anything about it. It really shows how many things you have to go through in life to get to ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: Pull the Trigger
All I cam say is WOW! I could feel all of your emotions and frustration and confusion coming through the writing. It is somwthing that one can relate to because ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: GoodBye
Quick comment. I liked this piece. I could really feel the emotion and anger you felt towards this person. Overall it was amazing! It something that one can relate to ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: I think of you
Quick comment. I really like the way it started out and you made the reader want to read more but it was kind of flat at the end of the ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: -Deleted-
hello:) I am rememberdecember and I will be your reviewer today. The title really caught my attention and made me want to read it. As I was reading it I ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: CHAPTER ONE ~ Prologue
Hi there,jojo I'm here to review:) I think your prologue was very creative and had alot of details in it. You really built up the suspense and mystery as the ...
Mar 10, 2011
