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Raabia Tabassum

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Yet Not

    Can you suggest me ways to correct that line?

    Dec 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Yet Not

    Thank Uh! :)

    Dec 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Yet Not

    Thaaank You So Much :)

    Dec 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Morning Breeze

    Thank You So Much! :)

    Oct 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Little does he know

    Thanks! I will work on it.

    Sep 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Little does he know

    Thank You. Yeah. I'll work on that.

    Sep 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Whir of A Sober Girl

    Thank Uh! :)

    Sep 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Artificial Love

    Try twisting the words here and there for a better flow but I think it sounds good the way you have written it too.

    Sep 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Little does he know

    Thank You So Much! :)

    Sep 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Romantic Re: Love Chapter 1 {Edited}

    You write so well. No, it was smooth. I didn't find the rush in this. GREAT! You are really creative. Keep writing. I really liked the last part "“You guys ...

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor Re: Love Chapter 2 {Edited}

    Woah! You really are magnificent at writing! Sorry, lost the thing for writing reviews so take this as a compliment. KEEP WRITING!

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Had It Coming

    Such a touching poem. Love it Keep writing!

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Lacuna

    Woah! Such an amazing and touching poem. I love these lines "You speak, and I melt, craving to hear you speak again, Laugh, and suddenly I can’t focus," I can't ...

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Satire Re: What The Heck?? Chapter 1

    Thanks

    Jul 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Antagonism & Howitzers & Egomania To Blood

    Thanks So Much. :)

    Jul 8, 2014


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