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Wow!!!! I must admit! I really loved this marvelous piece you have written. A mind blowing piece which the world has yet to discover. A truly flowing and originally invented ...

Hey! I think I will go one by one . The first two lines did not have a comma neither a fullstop So i think it should be more of ...

Hey! Great Piece. Frankly speaking I started reading and this poem seemed amazing. It was only when I started reading the second stanza I lost interest. I only liked the ...

Lemme start reviewing this wonderful piece you have written. First of all I think you need to put a full stop where necessary just to show that particular line has ...

Hey! I loved the title and I really loved the poem too. The lines "It begins with a whisper. A rumor of ancient treasure." forced me to read the entire ...

Hey a three line poem? Wow! Sounds interesting. I'd like to call it a quote or thought instead of poem. This doesn't seems to be a poem also. *Giggles*. I ...

Hey! A great title which lured me to read this piece. Now coming on to the negative points " He cackled a cackle that rattled my aching bones" I feel ...

Hey! I am here to review your story chapter 2 today. I have not read the chapter 1 so I may not be familiar with the story. I have no ...

Great write. Now coming on the negative points. When I started reading the poem it seemed a bit kiddish and good on the same hand. When I came upon the ...

Hey! Nice write there. I really like the lines "The vast expanse between the earth And darker tides of galaxy" "Above the constellations chart The route upon a velvet map'' ...

Hey! I like the lines 'You can lie And I'll believe" "You and I I'll accuse And you'll deny Driven by pride" A great title to start a poem with ...

Hey! A short and a sweet poem I must say. A great write. Although there were some mistakes. At the starting of your poem you did not capital your 'i' ...

Okay I am here to review this piece. When I started reading it the first three lines went good. But when I came on the 4th line "Tears run down ...

Hey! Great talent you have got there. A great start I must say and a great topic to choose and write on. You started the story well. I like the ...

Really Enjoyed the poem! Amazing I must say. I like the line "As the boy who never could be as strong as he writes." This line "I use to swear, ...