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Hey! :) Alright, so I really love this poem. You've managed to capture imagery and emotion beautifully into this. I love the way how the narrator couldn't decide whether to ...

Hi! I'm back again to review your first chapter! I hope you'll find this review helpful. :) First off, the typos: The meadow we were in was a small place ...

I love this. You have created such beautiful imagery and yet have packed so much emotion into it. Your word choice is superb and the rhythm is without a flaw. ...

I love this. You can so easily tell when someone has talent when they create such a short poem with so much emotion packed into it. I've always been obsessed ...

Hi! So, I'm Rachael and I'll be reviewing your Prologue here! :) First off, the typos: Kailee, my sister, I wonder... What would you say to me today? This sounds ...

I love this. It's short and sweet, yet leaves me with a million different images and ideas in my head. I love how you describe this woman as beautiful. The ...

Amazing, amazing, amazing. I know I said I'd review this a long time ago, but I haven't been on YWS lately because I was occupied with finals and all. But, ...

Hahaha, I absolutely love this. Pure genius. Your rhythm is spot on and doesn't feel forced. I liked the style that you used; it was quite hilarious. Also, I agree ...

Hey, Dreamwalker! I just came by to return the favor and review your novel! :) I hope I help out; I haven't done a review in quite some time. Live ...

Hi! I'm Rachael, and I've come to review your lovely novel! I'm going to split this into two reviews so that I can give you a thorough review on each ...

Hi! This is Rachael, come to review your marvelous novel! :) I'm excited to read this, since I've been waiting for Review day to be over so that you could ...

Hi! This is Rachael again, coming for another review. First off, I just want to say that most of what I say below are just opinions. Don't take them too ...

Hi!:) I'm Rachael and I just came to review your short story! First off, your title caught my attention; I like it a lot. I also like her name. It's ...

I. Love. This. Poem. Honestly, I can't see anything wrong with it. Why it doesn't have more views/reviews, I do not know. I adore this and I'm definitely putting it ...

Hiya! :) I'm Rachael! A warrior sent by Most High, I feel like this line disrupts the rhythm of the poem a bit. Maybe adding "the" before "Most High" would ...