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Oh my gosh. XD

Yes, it did! Thanks for the review! ~racket

Thanks for reviewing! Yeah, I'll work through this to get some more dialogue and less chunky info-paragraph stuff. Thank you! ~racket

Thanks! Yeah, the idea was so clear, but I couldn't get it out very well. I'll try to make it better! I was reading a book, and they were watching ...

Thank you! Yeah, I was struggling a bit at that part. I'll try to fix it. Thanks!

Welcome!

XD This is awesome! Your last two lines need to be capitalized, but other than that, this is great! Sorry, I'm not great at lyric reviews. *shrugs* Keep it up! ...

Welcome! ^.^

YESHH!!! I like it. It does not need help. Good job!

Welcome!

Your welcome!

Whuuuuu?

XDDDDD Uh... what just happened? *brain explodes* Awesome.

I didn't mean to imply I thought it was bad, 'cause it wasn't, I liked it, so you don't need to do any of the things I suggested, just it ...

Man, you're good at reviewing! Thank you so much! This is really helpful, and I'll start working on the things you pointed out right away. Thanks for reviewing!