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Re: Problems While Writing
This is very cool. "A writer's frustration comes from the mind we keep thinking and thinking until our poem falls out of line" This is my favorite stanza. It is ...
Aug 3, 2013 -
Re: Dear Josh (Letter 1)
This is a beautiful piece of work. I can tell you really thought this through and put some love into this work. I will list the things I like and ...
Jul 13, 2013 -
Re: A Silent Song
This is beautiful! I love it! I especially love how you only describe their eyes only, so beautiful and sweet. You also describe where you are and that helps me ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Remembering An Event
This is such an emotional story! I can't say I love it because it's so sad, but the message it sends is beautiful. You are gifted and I am blessed ...
Jun 9, 2013 -
Re: Truth will find You
I really enjoyed these lyrics. I especially love how easy it is to read, you space out the lines so I can read better. My favorite line was: "So take ...
Jun 9, 2013 -
Re: His Tender Love
I love this, Seraph! I especially love how you had the guts to write a poem on God and I'm really very impressed. Maybe touching it a little...... but a ...
Jun 7, 2013 -
Re: You.
This poem is ok, though there are a lot of things you need to fix. But first I'll tell you e=what I like. What I like: 1). I like the ...
Jun 7, 2013 -
Re: You.
This poem is ok, though there are a lot of things you need to fix. But first I'll tell you e=what I like. What I like: 1). I like the ...
Jun 7, 2013 -
Re: Some of my Poems
I'm am going to critique "Love Lives On". I love this poem. Beautiful. "Once upon a memory I gave you a rose. Like a photograph, It's beauty timeless froze." I ...
Jun 7, 2013 -
Re: Going Crazy: A Beginner's Guide
I really love this poem. It describes me perfectly! Sorry about that. Anyway, I really like this poem because it shows the different parts of you. I can totally relate ...
Jun 7, 2013 -
Re: The Magic Recipe!
I really enjoyed this piece. Very nicely written, especially from 5th grade. I like the feeling I got when I read it: Nice warm ans happy, like I safely arrived ...
Jun 7, 2013 -
Re: Benjamin Bumblebee
I like this poem a lot. Nonsense poems are always so fun to read. It does sound sort of sound like a nursery rhyme and I like that. Itsy-bitsy and ...
Jun 7, 2013 -
Re: Goofy
I like this poem. It expresses very well how you feel about this kid. I love this part: "Watch what you say, Careful what you do, Or else I might ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: Myself; Yourself
I agree with the other reviews as well. Completely confusing, but the end tells you why and then it makes perfect sense! Odd how that works, right? So confusing, then, ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: Once I wished that I never rhyme...
I like the topic of this poem. A very nice idea. I like how you are wishing you couldn't rhyme, but are doing it all the while. What confuses me ...
Jun 6, 2013
