qaralynn

I know this won't be helpful at all but this is a very great write and I love it! *likes*

heey my shiney one! Nice essay! I really like your writing style and I love the idea behind this and how you worked it out. I totally agree with all ...

helloo Hayden! I absolutely love this write! It's beautiful! And that's all I actually wanted to say XD Love it!! -qaralynn-

heeey dezz! I really like this write! I don't have any criticism for you so I'm gonna keep this short XD Great job and I can't wait till the day ...

heey anime!! This an awesome write and I loved it and I'm really glad you posted it! *hugs* Yup that was all XD It's just awesome!

helloo yuriiko!! I love this! :D that's all I am going to say yuss *nods* there's nothing to criticize anyway XD

sollyplushie!!!! XD hi :) I love this poem...don't have any criticism for you XD nice work!!

great piece! Most people don't see themselves like others do..I don't have any criticism really...:) nice!!

nice write I really like the lines: Just one single spark Can light the darkest of dark. One pebble in the ocean Can set the water in motion..

I like this!!! and your right it looks like my poem is an answer to yours!

I really like this piece! Thanks for waking us up! XD

nice write! I do suggest you change 'drip' into something else.. Because drip doesn't really seem to fit in this poem but either way: I love it!

I love this..don't have any critiques

beautiful!!! perhaps you should change fish into something else yeah and I didn't really get the 'heart soul' thing either but other than that: I absolutely love it! great write

I like it! You shouldn't change the ''ain't'' because it sounds good.. perhaps you should change: ''life awesome'' into: "that life is awesome" but either way, great work!