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Re: Booty Shorts
Hey JoJo! I'm not much of a poet (project for the summer) but I loved the message! I'm so sick of people wearing shorts so short that their but is ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: I Don't Wanna Wear My Pants Anymore!
And THAT is the exact reason that I refuse to wear skiny jeans (haha my pants were so bad that I lost feeling in my calves). Lets just say that ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Phoenix: The Fire Bird (Contest Entry)
Hi! Wow, this is a really good plot. I love the intro, it's so unique and it fills you in without an info dump (I don't know about you, but ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: The List, #071: The True You
I would love to give you some indepth review right about now, but I'm still trying to figure out what you said; don't change that. Seriously, I'm going to be ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: CHAPTER ONE ~ Prologue
First off, love the cover. I have no idea how you did it, but don't change it. This is a prime example of why I hate reading on websites like ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: If I Were a DC Writer [NOW AVAILABLE ON ITUNES]
Over all, I definatly like it (and yes I will press the button when I'm done). The learics have meaning and are something orrigional, but they could use a little ...
Mar 2, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
Yes! Finnally I know something about Zayn! So is he immortal or just extreemly powerful? And what is the difference between an Elf or a Centar and Devines? Or are ...
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: Delete
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! How could Violet die? Sorry just had to say that. I see why you hated writing it. The entire middle bit I was sitting on the edge of my ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
I'm running out of ways to start these reviews, I really am. Every time i read your work I am just stuned. I actually fet that buterfly feeling in my ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
Once again, simply amacing and a cureall for lethargy (yea I'm very tired but this definatly woke me up). I agree with the revew above me for the most part, ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
I definatly liked this version better, the other seemed too 'oh we just happened to be here so now everything is happy!' This acheeves the same thing only it keeps ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
Once again, nothing short of amacing. I only saw two things that bugged me. Either of the structures were barely standing. Maybe this is just me, but either sounds a ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
I loved it, plain and simple. From the begining you had the reader falling in love whith Zayn, but i had honestly assumed he was part of a prologe and ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: The Orphan From The Future (Prologue)
The story line has serious potential. I don't know what you are planning for, but it feels like it building up to be an adventure story (got to love those). ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
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I love how you go from having the reader believe that Luis is just some normal person and in love (girlfriend/boyfriend) with violet to fatherly figure to savior to wherwulf. ...
Dec 19, 2010
