primrose22

Oh, I noticed that you fixed the formatting. :) I only have a couple of grammar and style issues, and they're really nitpicky. :) I think that "high quality" in ...

Wow. I just LOVE the way that you cut off the lines in this poem! I am a big fan of enjambment-type stuff, so. ...yeah. That part about the cavities ...

Cute. The first stanza is my favorite. The second one is okay, but it is just that "roasted marshmallows on the fire" is so cliche. The third one needs the ...

Oh, congrats on getting this published. :) It's well-written, portrays a really good message with personal experience, and is just plain scary, okay? I was freaking out in that second ...

Oh, it's alright. At least it's not as bad as submitting something with fifteen hundred typos. XD (I do that a lot.) Congrats on your first post. :) Oh! A ...

I really love the idea of this! Maybe instead of just having a lietter-like signature at the bottom, though, you could also have a "Dear Readers" or "Dear Writers" or ...

Hello! First I just want to say that you have some really cool words in here. "Filched" and "elfin" are my favorite. :3 The problem, I think, is your delivery, ...

Hello! Grammar-wise, I have a few suggestions! :) I think that this that I’ve always been a little too late for, well just about everything. should really be this: that ...

This was a fun and cute little poem! :) You have a nice rhythym going all throughout this, but at some places it does mess up a litte or become ...

Wow, this is such a great poem! You really are talented. ^^ The imagery is so vivid, and with just a few well-chosen words. *fangirl* :) The only suggestion I ...

Hello! I read angel83's comment, and I do want to say that I hold a different opinion. I know in writing that you definitely want to be as specific as ...

Hello! I'm a big grammar freak, so I'm just going to put all that stuff down here in the spoiler. "Would you stop already?!" I screamed glaring at my twin ...