"once upon time...." these are the words we all are familier with. ever since we were kids we have heard these words a hundred times, yet these words thrill us every time we hear them as we wonder in what new mysterious land these words will take us this time. when we were 2 our mom used to make us go to sleep by reciting lullabies from books. when we became 5, our mom read us bedtime fairytales and when we became 10 our parents handed us the famous five and hardy boys for us to spend our time. in every aspect someway or the other we have always remained connected to books and so it's obvious that everyone loves reading!! reading just like watching tv or listning to music is an integral part of our daily routine.
reading either newspaper or novels is an activity which is enjoyed by all and the proof of it is that in this 21st century authors like jk Rowling, Nicholas sparks and chetan bhagat are among the most successful people. their stories are not just enjoyed in the form of books but also in movies. so, all those people out there who think that no matter what century this is,reading is the most enjoyable activity,keep reading and keep exploring those magical and mysterious land created by your favorite author......
KEEP READING......
Hey there!
The concept of this piece is pretty good! But I think the way you executed it was a bit flawed.
I felt this piece could have been a bit more clean, as in without all the unnecessary periods and grammatical errors.
First let me tell you, you need to capitalize the beginning of each sentence. Otherwise people wouldn't want to read it. And also the way you've written the first paragraph feels a little..off.
Read it again and I'm sure you'll understand what I mean. If not, I'll show you:
You see? These lines seem a bit off. I think you could have written it better
And also in the second paragraph, the first few lines are also grammatically incorrect. And I'd really be glad if you capitalized the sentences
The number of periods at the end of the article is completely unnecessary
Yeah so thats it. You might want to proof read the entire article.
The topic is quite good. You dont find many people actually reading paperback or hardcover books these days
Good effort!
Keep writing! I dont see anyother posts
-Divz
I really love the idea of this! Maybe instead of just having a lietter-like signature at the bottom, though, you could also have a "Dear Readers" or "Dear Writers" or something like that.
You also need to make sure that you capitlize the beginning of each sentence as well, and spell out all the numbers instead of just using numerals.
All in all, this is a very nice and sweet idea. ^^ Good job.