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Hi flowerteen! Sorry if this sounds critical, but I'm not sure this qualifies as a poem. There is no meter, flow, stanzas, ect. This is what I would consider a ...

First of all, I think this is a great, but I do agree with recycledsoul that the "silly me" part is a little repetitive. Maybe instead of "silly me" for ...

Hello! I agree with the others that you have a great start on your story. I'm not crazy about the name, but that might just be me. I really like ...

Wow, you are really good at writing! I really love your simile right here. It shows that you tried extremely hard on this first chapter! : Same school I’d been ...

I really liked this poem. It made me feel happy and sad at the same time. I agree with PeaceLuvPoems that this was lovely in this poem-letter format. But the ...

First off, WHERE IS THE PROPER GRAMMER? There is no puncuation, like where is the indents? Like right here: "So, beautiful." She spoke, so softly it was almost like he ...

I really loved it even though I thought it was kinda cliche. It was very beautifully written. It was cheesy, but in a good way. But there is one thing ...

This was a really thoughtful poem. i like how you to the most simple thing and blew it up so that we see it from a different point of view. ...

This was great! I like this story and I think given time, it can become an outstanding story. However, I can't really guess what time period this is. Is it ...

Really good!