plathonstone

Hello Tigerlilly37, even though I am not against abortion I have to say that I found this poem moving. I am someone who is (as I'm sure most people are) ...

Hi there, whatabook! plathonstone here to review (though I'm never very good at them.) I really liked this poem! I loved how simple it was, it reminded me how simple ...

Hey there! First of all can I just say wow! I am in love with this piece. It is so incredibly honest but masked at the same time which leaves ...

Hi there Cairo! I'm not too good at giving feedback but I'll give it a go. First of all, I loved this poem, I could really feel the emotions the ...

Hey, Firstly I want to say that, especially as you're new to poetry, I think this poem is brilliant! I really felt so many emotions when reading these few words, ...

Hey! sorry if this review isn't much help, I just felt I wanted to add a few of my opinions in here. I would like to say how nicely this ...

Hi, this poem was cute but I feel it lacked quite a bit. A lot of what is sad doesn't make a lot of sense and seems to be more ...

This was so cute! I loved the sweet description of 'sweet brown sugar' it was so adorable and really made me smile. This poem possesses so much elegance and beauty ...

Beautiful! I loved this! wow! Firstly, 'I feel like velvet when you touch me' this might just be my favourite line. It is so simple yet tells me so much ...

Sinister! is the first word that comes to mind. Okay, firstly I would like to talk about the first line: when I first read the 'once upon a time' I ...

I really got gripped by this story just with the first paragraph! I think as the story goes on it could use a little more character development, let us get ...

I like the use of repetition that introduces the paragraphs. I am very curious as to where this story is going but I have a feeling its going to be ...

Hi! I liked this! some lines that particularly stood out to me were: 'Jokes turn into weapons, Insecurities as ammunition' I feel this part really expressed the whole theme of ...

I loved the format and structure of this poem! its almost like a shape poem but without literally writing about (what I think looks like) a mountain, the poem feels ...

This poem is heart breaking but important. It could reach out to a lot of people. I especially love the verse "One day he will realize that black and blue ...