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Re: The Shattering Melodies
Holy buckets. Tell me you're going to publish your poetry someday because it's relatable, beautiful, you're rhythm is awesome, and, quite frankly, it's perfect.
Dec 18, 2014 -
Re: Lady of the Lake
Ok. Thanks for making me tear up and get chills in the middle of class! -Pendr
Dec 18, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 39: The Sacrifice
Thank you! It came from the heart. Halfway with the first draft or second draft?
Dec 15, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 37: The Revelation
You know, if I knew you in real life, sorry to say, I would beat you with a book, too. And to your second paragraph: 1. THEN WHY DID YOU ...
Dec 13, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 42: The Decision
-buries face in blanket and gives up all will to live- I just.... I just... I just...... I just don't know. I still don't understand... I... I still want to ...
Dec 13, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 39: The Sacrifice
I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I MUST KEEP READING.
Dec 13, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 36: The Counter-attack
-breathes heavily and shakily to hold back screams and tears- I know exactly what he's going to do.... IT'S TOO SOOOOOOOOON
Dec 13, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 35: The Wait
THESE CHAPTERS KEEP GETTING SHORTER AND SHORTER. AND I'M SO CLOSE TO FORTY-TWO. AAAH. I JUST WANT IT TO LAST FOREVER!!
Dec 13, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 31: The Return
Ok. HER MOM WORKED AT THE FACILITY?! OH MY WORD! I CAN'T EVEN BREATHE RIGHT NOW. But considering the reaction I had, Billie should probably have more of a reaction ...
Dec 12, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 30: The Roof
-sobs- Only twelve more chapters for now D''''':
Dec 12, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 30: The Roof
-sobs- Only twelve more chapters for now D''''':
Dec 12, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 29: The Facility
Whoa..... Whoa. Whoa. Ok I literally am like only able to say 'whoa.' I could continue but after a couple more times it would get annoying. So I'll only say ...
Dec 12, 2014 -
Re: chapter 28: The Arrow
-huge sigh of relief- okay. ok. then disregard my most recent comment. By the way. THIS CHAPTER WAS. SO. GOOD. AND. INTENSE. AND I ALMOST DIED. AGAIN.
Dec 12, 2014 -
Re: chapter 28: The Arrow
Like, literally. If you remove these chapters, I will slaughter you like the Legion did the rebellers.
Dec 12, 2014 -
Re: chapter 28: The Arrow
No! Keep these chapters in! Bro! They are so necessary! It's perfect! Don't remove them! Don't do it!
Dec 12, 2014
