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  • Poetry » General, General Re: freedom in the darkness

    Hi IronSpark, Why so pessimistic? This is ironic to how the poem is so optimistic :p I found this simple, light headed poem quite refreshing after reading more intense and ...

    Sep 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The composer

    Hi! I really love this poem since it openly portray's someone's love for composing music. Although I tend to prefer poems which can be interpreted in different ways, I found ...

    Sep 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Girl in the Painting

    Poetry is a literal work which I rarely used to appreciate when I was younger however, I grew up to be particularly fond of it. Given my tendency to be ...

    Sep 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Earth

    Hey! This is a very simple poem with basic imagery. Due to the simplicity of the language used and imagery, the image portrayed of the earth is not very hooking ...

    Jul 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dreams and Feelings

    When I lay my eyes on a short poem I tend to expect that it is either a riddle or a poem withholding an intense message. This poem prominently reveals ...

    Jul 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: Face of War

    Hi GriffinClaw, War is a very difficult topic to tackle since it requires certain knowledge and experience. In order for such a poem to be powerful and heart touching which ...

    Apr 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: The Consumer

    Hey ToritheMonster, First off, I think that this is an extraordinary piece of literature. I liked the way how built up your poem by first making the reader aware of ...

    Apr 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 12:05 a.m.

    Hi Iggy, I think this is the first time that I've read any of your work and you definately made a good first impression. I like your writing with the ...

    Apr 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: No More

    Hey!! Looks like the speaker is waking up from his/her illusion life o fear and is now determined to face the world with an optimistic perspective. YAY!! This is a ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Lost in your words

    Hey!! WOW this is an exceptionally good poem!! seriously, I really liked it. The chosen topic is very realistic and coherent. I could really relate to the poem and you ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, General Re: I'll Face Myself

    Hey!!!This is me and I'll be reviewing this really flowing song. Positive: The lyrics are really flowing and it has a lovely rhythm. It gives a positive message about the ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: To See You Leave

    Hey, this is me reviewing you short poem :) So, to start off I really liked the first three verses since although no emotions are spoken in literal words, these ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: What Happened

    This writing really got to me with all its deep and heart touching emotions. I love the way you emphasised on your inner conflict of emotions and how you managed ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Most human

    This is an unusual and very creative poem. I really loved it since it is unique and gets the reader into thinking about it. It is deep in a certain ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Action / Adventure Re: Take Me Home: Chapter Five: Hit the Fan

    Hi Andrea! You really managed to hook me to this story. Really I am so excited about the hopefully soon upcoming chapter. What can I say? Keep writing!!!!! You have ...

    Jun 4, 2013


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