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Re: Waiting
Hi Chanta, This is paula08, here to review. So let's start, shall we? First of all I want to say that this was a good try especially for a 12 ...
Apr 10, 2015 -
Re: Gifted: Chapter 2 Chad
Hey, it's me again! When I realised that the next chapter is already posted I came here straight away :) So, let's start, shall we? The first thing I noticed ...
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: Maps To Nowhere - Ch. 1
Hey rainbowwaffles, I was supposed to review this quite a long time ago. I'm really sorry for the belated review, hopefully you still appreciate it. So, let's go through it, ...
Apr 2, 2015 -
Re: The Academy
Hey Kelly, I must say that the topic is very interesting and your writing kept me engaged throughout the whole work. The thing I would like to point out to ...
Apr 2, 2015 -
Re: Gifted: Chapter 1 You've got to be kidding me?
Hey! I love reading these kind of supernatural stories so you got me here. What I don't get is why it is rated 16+ because it seems to me that ...
Apr 2, 2015 -
Re: A War Within My Head
Hey Chaser! I must say that the topic of the poem is quite interesting however, the poem needs a bit of improvement in some areas. Hopefully with this review I'll ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: Fields Of Murder
Hey Margo, This was quite an interesting poem , I actually really liked it. It is not like any poem I've ever read which is a good thing. The first ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: A Thankyou Note
Hey, I really like this poem since I can absolutely relate to it . Apart from that it is well-written and flowing which is something I really like in poetry. ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: She Is Me
Hey there:) This is quite a good poem however, it can be improved. Throughout this poem you are speaking about a very sorrowful and depressive topic which ought to trigger ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: See What I've Become
This poem put me a bit off-guard since it was not what I expected. That's a compliment:) I really liked your poem especially since it describes perfectly reality. Sometimes people ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: A Letter to Raven
Reading is a passion of mine but not just reading anything. I find it intriguing to read works with a unique taste. Your writing technique captured my interest especially since ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: Project: LOVE [Chapter 1 - Revamped & Edited]
paula08 here to review as requested! Let's start with a basic over view, shall we? Then we could jump over to a more detailed analysis. Here we go..... First of ...
Sep 11, 2014 -
Re: Poem I just wrote- I love him.
Hi :) I'm just going to write you a short review which will hopefully be useful and interesting :) Well, to start off, it is evident that the speaker is ...
Sep 9, 2014 -
Re: Overdose
Hi :] I am actually left speechless over here. This is a really deep and traumatizing poem which is portrayed brilliantly through the use of imagery and great choice of ...
Sep 9, 2014 -
Re: Broken Beyond Repair: Prologue
Hi there :) Let me start by reviewing the first paragraph of this writing: In my opinion the start of the prologue is rather cliché. Having read a series of ...
Sep 9, 2014
