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Hello ~ This piece has a lot of potential. And I know that the word 'potential' is the cushion people usually throw on the cement before they go shoving you ...

Hi QTs I'm gonna do a review o; I like the general ideas you guys have rolling. The "God Playing Sims" and "Humanity Thinking They're Bigger Than They Are" concepts ...

Hi there. I know I said I would review this, and I haven't forgotten (obviously :P ). I just keep rereading your poem and then scrolling down to look at ...

Hey there! I'm about to be as honest with you as Gordon Ramsay in the kitchen ~ First, the nitpicky, little things. It might seem overwhelming, but I wanted to ...

Joke: What do you do when you have writer's block? You Keepwriting (Sorry, I couldn't help it. Anyway, onto the review ~ ) As I was reading your work, the ...

Hey, bud As was covered already, this is witty and original. I don't know how you came up with writing an idea like this; Benjamin Franklin coming back from the ...

Hey!~ I loved reading this chapter. It might be my favorite thus far. The background you provided for Zaid, particularly the reminiscing back to his childhood, inclined me to connect ...

Hey Autumns~ This chapter, while enjoyable to read, seems a little bit more rushed than the last. However, I do have to say that your storyline seems to be holding ...

Hello~ First off, I really enjoy your writing style. It looks very professional and kept me thoroughly engaged the entire time I was reading, even though dialogue was not extremely ...

Hey Stranger~ I don't think I've ever reviewed one of your works, and you've been kind enough to review one of mine, so I figured I'd drop by. Overall, I ...

Hello~ I think that the concept behind this is good. The fundamentals you've constructed could potentially allow you to create something original. However, I don't think this was original. The ...

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Hi~ This is God-awfully beautiful. It took me forever to review this ( forever ), and it deserves a better review than I have to give you—luckily, it looks like ...

Hi Can~ I don't think I've ever reviewed anything of yours, so I thought I'd drop by. ^^ I thought your poem definitely conveyed the message you were trying to ...

Hi Min~ You have a very solid idea here. I think—and sorry if I'm rushing into things here—the problem with this piece is that you're almost overly blunt in your ...