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Hi, Lightbombhunter, Fair warning, I stopped midway through chapter 3. I will go back to reading later and I'll probably publish another review for the rest. This entry was very ...

Hi, Ashotto. I'm of course moved by your subject. We have all felt lost at one point or another. I didn't necessarily get the enumeration of the first few lines ...

Hi, I really liked this poem. So much love and so few illusions... The imagery was very effective, I think, just colorful enough to hook the reader and just ambiguous ...

Hi, Bookish. Thanks for this helpful contribution. Not only was your advice very useful, but it reminded me of a discussion I had with my grandmother a while ago (and ...

Hi there. I liked this shortstory but I agree with Keumgan, we need more info about the team. That being said, it was very funny, especially the final "Crap..." Keepwriting ...

Hi, it saddened me to read you, Miranda. It was very brave of you to put yourself out there like that. I'm sure you will find out that very few ...

Hello, Belle. A very short review. First of all, but it's not your fault, I'm beginning to hate poems, mangas, movies and novels about amnesia. It's been done, and done, ...

Hi, Catalyst, I loved this poem. I liked its rhythm. For me, poetry, no matter the language, exists only so it can be declaimed. This piece looked like it would ...

Hi, DragonNoir. I know nothing about ice skating but I found this piece interesting nonetheless. You seem to know exactly what you are talking about from a technical standpoint. It ...

Hi, Audy. I appreciate the quick pace at which you published those first three parts but I would appreciate it if you paid more attention to grammar. We still get ...

Hi, Keepwriting. Thanks for this. It made for an interesting read. It got me thinking anyway. I believe you have the causal relationship between being Christian and having a hard ...

Short review for a short piece. First of all, yes, there are some tenses issues but nothing horrible. The message gets across just fine. Nice imagery. I can almost hear ...

I was inegally impressed by your poem. On one hand, I can relate to the feelings that permeates it, being stuck in a limbo where every word seems to weigh ...

Hello again. So...This second part was nice. It built up slowly but powerfully. I liked the 'ritual' part in the beginning. Read right after Luneset 1.1, it gave the impression ...

For a short review: - Atmosphere: The mood of this piece was interesting, eerie and strange but, oddly, not creepy. Not only was the description memorable and compelling but I ...