Hello, Belle. A very short review.
First of all, but it's not your fault, I'm beginning to hate poems, mangas, movies and novels about amnesia. It's been done, and done, and done.
I actually liked those three questions in the beginning. They got everyone nicely confused. But, then, you started bringing in memories, introducing a past tense into your present and I think it was a mistake. Too narrative. Though your descriptions were good, they could have been more gripping.
In all fairness, I was prejudiced against this poem. I will have to read something else of yours.
Points: 144
Reviews: 126
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