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Hey :) It was kind of odd in the beggining I agree with Chevy, but it got better! Good job! :D :elephant:

Hello whence! :) I liked the poem just that you need punctuation. ok well that's it. good job! Keep it up! :elephant:

Ummm.....:huh: I didn't really get this poem. I would work on the punctuation on this you tend to put commas after every line and then periods at the end of ...

Hi! :) I liked this a lot! I thought the last paragraphs were the best but the beginning was a bit abrupt I agree. Well Great job anyway and keep ...

Hey :) Good Poem I liked it a lot :elephant: I especially liked the part where it said: The lost girl, meets the found boy, looking in the lost and ...

Hey LD! :) I've always loved reading your poems! This one was good too! I like how you describe things and how you take a verb or something and make ...

Hey! :) Good job! I don't know if this was a poem or like some statement though. And maybe also a little more punctuation. I don't know but good job ...

Hey! :) This was pretty good. I thought from what you're trying to say I think you should make it longer. Well except for that it was pretty good. I ...

WOW! you got a lot of replies on this! I thought that it was more of a statement. Maybe make it a little longer but I really liked it. Even ...

Hi! Welcome it says your a new member. Um as for your poem I thought you used a lot of periods and commas. Some of the rhyming didn't work I ...

Hi Alanna! Hey that's one of the class mates names from are you smarter than a 5th grader! oops anyway... :) I liked this poem. One suggestion I think you ...

Hey onetrue! :) Remember me? I met you in the chat room! Well welcome! I liked this poem. oh and just for a suggestion you should critique some other peoples ...

WOW! I really liked it! Good description and totally true! WOW! I can't stop saying wow! lol :D great job and keep it up. I loved the part where you ...

Hi! Remember me? I met you in the chat room! Anyway good poem it didn't really call out to me and I really don't know what it's like to be ...

hi! Um... it was pretty good. Except I felt that after I read it, it was somewhere in the middle of something. Also I have no idea what you're trying ...